[< Previous 374 375 376 377 378 379 380 Next >]
AV "epic" doujin draft pg C daeva_agas [More of my stuff] (2010/3/4 5:03)More about this item Again, this is also skipping a few pages from the previous one. The third and last page draft I'll be posting. This time I have the text in the bubbles. Pardon the Japanese SFX in the last panel. I always seem to do that unless I remind myself to use English SFX. First panel : Why the hesitation? Is it not a good deal?Second panel, left bubble : You are safe and you can have great powerSecond panel, middle bubble : Your friends will be spared tooSecond panel, right bubble : And of course, you can be with your "dearest" sun priest... Third panel : Should he no longer interest you, however...last panel : (SFX) dokun --> tha-dump (heart beat)Tried to make Agas sound like some kinda smooth-talker here. Well, he's supposed to be telling Dameon "You're doing it WRONG!!" and "demonstrates" how it's supposed to be done. I mean, pretending to be friends and right at the very end suddenly jumping out saying "Hey, guess what? I'm with the bad guys! Come join the dark side!" is totally not persuasive in the least. Although threatening to kill everyone is technically also not very persuasive, I still think it's more convincing. *headdesk* This one page took me 2 HOURS to draw. ARGH!!!!
[< Previous 374 375 376 377 378 379 380 Next >]
The comments are owned by the poster. We aren't responsible for their content.
Poster
Thread
BeMused
Posted: 2010/3/21 13:37 Updated: 2010/3/21 13:37
Witches and Warlocks
Joined: 2008/2/3
From:
Gold: 675
Re: AV "epic" doujin draft pg C
Moar!!
All Games
RPG
Adventure
SIM
Story
Cute
Game Kits
Amaranth Games (games only by us)
Re: AV "epic" doujin draft pg C
