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Dawn
By: theone [More of my stuff] (2010/10/17 7:37)
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As I sit and watch the dawn
And see the sun rising now
Shining on the deer's fawn
I wonder that how
was this earth before we were born?

Was it nice or was it bad
Was it great or just a passing fad
Was it temporary or permanent
Was it a time to rent?

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SkylerWXG	Posted: 2010/10/17 7:41 Updated: 2010/10/17 7:41
Druids Joined: 2009/11/14 From: Gold: 1311	Re: Dawn It reminds me of forests.It's quite good.Have you ever thought of being a poet?

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theone	Posted: 2010/10/17 7:42 Updated: 2010/10/17 7:42
Witches and Warlocks Joined: 2009/6/8 From: Gold: 2378	Re: Dawn A bit. I like the idea. Thanks for the comments. Though I can only write when I feel like it

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Cryzkia	Posted: 2010/10/18 7:41 Updated: 2010/10/18 7:41
Enchanters Joined: 2009/5/4 From: Gold: 1185	Re: Dawn Nice one. Also, most people i know(including me), only write when they are in the mood. I tend to use moment when they are special(Sad, Happy, Touched, etc. etc.) to write, draw or stuff. It's normal to use the moment for something good. It's great.

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