So this is my re-design of female Agas who now plays a protagonist role on a story I’m working on named Heir of Amon (since I dropped my previous one).

Anatomy fails apart, this is my first concept training of Agas. I decided to get rid of the horns, because, despite having Deva affiliation (she’s not a Deva), she’s not from a dragon bloodline, and only Devas of dragon bloodline’s have horns (every humanoid creature in Demeter with horns had at least a parent or grandparent who was a dragon).

I tried to make her legs wide and her chest wide on purpose. She has a really wide bone frame due to her diet (calcium based) and her training who led her to develop a lot of muscle mass. Her arms look short, but idk how to fix her and her hand was a completely and utter fail -.-…

PS - Last time i try to draw with guiding lines... Epic fail!

Anyway, presentations:


“I don’t want to be one of the dudes…”

Name: Agas
Occupation: Blade Dancer Apprentice
Species: Unknown (not elven because there are no elfs in the world of Demeter).
Residence: Sintara Continent, Village of Gul, Lady Gallespe’s Orphanage

So Agas was kind of adopted as Swarchza’s (a Deva) apprentice after he realized he could use her third eye to channel his powers, he’s the one who also named Agas this way. At the beginning he thought Agas was an Aghash, a low rank demon that has a third eye that causes illness, that’s why he called her Agas, but realized her third eye was more an All-Seeing-Eye.

Agas has lived in Gul ever since she was a 8, raised by Gallespe and forced to study every day with Swarchza. She’s learning to become a Blade-Dancer, which is sort of like a sword singer but they don’t use swords. Blade Dancers can either do magic themselves or channel a magical user’s will. She is a hell of dancer (she’s a blade-dancer… DUH!) and enjoys crafting her own perfumes, a hobby she develop to attract her master’s attention since he couldn’t exactly tell that she was wearing a really cute dress (he’s blind).

Agas has little control over her third eye, who, most of the time, seems to have a mind of its own. Whenever the eye is controlled by Swarchza it takes a snake like green color (Swarchza’s eye color), the rest of the time, it looks blue, even though Agas has naturally violet eyes.

In terms of personality, her personality seems to be influatiated by the cooperative works of her Master Swarchza, her caretaker Gallespe and her adoptive sister Maura, and her boy friend’s Mazurka and Kite. So she is smart, resilient and strong, she’s also caring and feminine and reckless and curious. Aside, she’s very emotional and temperamental, being able to burst into tears if you really get her mad and kick your arse because you made her cry!

She’s average strong, if she was guy. On the other hand, because she’s stronger than any other girl in her town, it leads her to be bullied by the girls and treated as a dude by the guys… Neither make her happy.