|Re: Black Hearted Love|
Subject: Re: Black Hearted Love
by belinda on 2012/4/2 13:03:23
So now you are talking about betrayal.. it was in your very first post, you know, that the story would include betrayal. OK, it wasn't your first one, it was the footnote to chapter two. I still hope it is not any of the good guys we have met so far. You are doing well in the story telling, when you are all done and have it still on your computer you might want to spell and grammar check it. At this point I'd rather keep hearing the story than comment on specific grammar points though.