|Re: Long As Ever|
Subject: Re: Long As Ever
by diamondmist on 2012/5/10 14:49:28
A pity that this has no comments - despite the initial slow-paced start and lack of action, I think you described the sequence very well. I do hope there will be a more detailed fight later on - after all, you write pretty well and I'd like to see that in a battle sequence. Waiting for more.