|Re: Uncertainty Principle- A Runaway Bride ending story (eventual RxL)|
Subject: Re: Uncertainty Principle- A Runaway Bride ending story (eventual RxL)
by BuryTheCastle on 2010/6/20 20:36:50
Blurble, you are an excellent writer. Seriously. The longest thing I've ever written was 38 pages and 5 chapters long... and that one fell apart. Quickly. And this is 125-or-something pages long... wow is all I can say. Not only that, but this manages to stay close enough to the canon (though it seems a bit more modern in here than it was in the game), and the characters are in character.
Plus this is hilarious. I loved Te'ijals letter, I was seriously laughing the whole time. My funny stuff is either entirely parody-ish or not funny at all. So, nice job.
I would be willing to look for mistakes- I'm my sister's own personal spell check/proofreader.