|Re: Uncertainty Principle- A Runaway Bride ending story (eventual RxL)|
Subject: Re: Uncertainty Principle- A Runaway Bride ending story (eventual RxL)
by daeva_agas on 2010/6/30 16:38:10
Someone's messing up Rhen's spell!!! Oh noes!!!! Could it be..... *gasp* Dameon?? Nah, that's impossible... he left already... right?
I love how your wrote Lars having problems with his box. And now I get what you mean by "starting off the chapter by something completely random". The box exploding is a very nice bonus Except ever since my whole party got Time Storm'd to death by Agas about 7 times in a row I'm kinda sensitive about "Time Storm" now... Not that it's a big problem, but just by seeing the woirds written down, even if I'm the one who wrote it myself, it will make me react all weird. Thankfully no one can see it.
You know, for some reason I suddenly wondered what it would be like if Rhen somehow summoned, or made it seem as though she has summoned the seven daevas... I'm sure people would freak out, but it would be priceless Or maybe it would actually get Rhen kicked out of the competition for summoning high-ranking demons?