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Chapter One:
Ashlee walked outside onto the balcony. her room was on the top floor, which was four floors from the first. The wind blowing her hair everywhere. Though it was freezing she just stepped over to the railway. The paint was pealing off the sides. But that didn't matter. Just it would have been nicer if she could have had her life be better in a way. Everything just had to turn out the wrong ways. Everything couldn't have ever been perfect for her, not with all the dramatic things and problems flowing in and out of her mind. It could be better in some way to end the whole thing and start over. Began something new, more fresh then what she'd been having to go through for the sixteen years of her life. It was going to end now, here. And nobody, no one, anywhere, or any place, idea, thought, or anything else could stop her now. She threw her her hands almost together on the pole like fence. They turned white from the ice on the fence that stopped her from falling off and landing with a crash. If she fell she'd die. It was true that she wouldn't make it all the way down five floors without breaking her neck or soemthing. Ashlee bit her lip as a chill went down her spine. She closed her eyes thinking for as brief second. Then she jumped up and threw her feet up on the fence blocker as well. Ashlee slowly stood up and then shifted back anf fourth trying not to fall quite yet. Her eyes grew big as she looked down to notice that it was further down then she thought it was. From behind Ashlee her little sister sneaked out onto the balcony as well. Ashlee hadn't noticed yet but she would soon. It was going to be hard to get her down but her little sister had an idea. "Sis? her sister said as she saw Ashlee turn around. Though it seemed like it was impossible she gasped and told her grip on the fence with her feet. She slipped back on the ice and then suddenly started dropping down from the balcony at an increasing speed. Ashlee screamed as the ground began to get bigger and bigger. Until it went black. Ashlee's little sister looked down and began to sigh. She saw the blood flow out and she shrugged walking back inside the house.
Posted on: 2009/1/24 16:46
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It's a nice story there. But I would like to suggest to enlarge the font size a little, so that it will not cause eye strain.
 Waiting for update soon! ^_^
Posted on: 2009/1/24 21:04
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Ohhh I like the story but the font is kinda too small...good job though!
Posted on: 2009/1/24 22:20
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you're good at making stories
i like it xD i hope you'll put more
Posted on: 2009/1/25 3:08
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| Life after death. Chapter Two | #5 | ||||||||||
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Chapter Two:
Ashlee sat up. It was a thought that she could have been sleeping still but the things that happened to her she felt. She wasn't on the ground anymore. She must have been moved after the crash and knock out and now she was laying in darkness. She couldn't move, she could feel, but nobody seemed to be around to hear her thinking and trying to talk. It hurt to. What was happening to her anyways? Was she dead? That was the point but death was always supposably better then living, and much easier too. Ashlee looked through her mind searching for what she thought was her past. It was almost impossible to think up because her memory must have been erased when she fell. The only thing she could remember were the things that happened to her throughtout time for about two years. Alot could happen then, but people believe that it wouldn't be that exciting in two years of someones life. But that was Ashlee's whole life. Her basic reason to want to die and all her sisters troubles and her friends. It was when they moved into the house that Ashlee fell off the balcony at and where her sister went crazy and where all her friends hid out. It was their safe spot. A place next to the beach. It was somewhere nobody went because nothing happened there and also because most of the world's tradgedys happened there but they were invisable and nobody cared about them. It all started when Ashlee and her little sister Ryder moved to the abandoned house next to a beach. Though the house was five stories tall and emtpy and big, dark, and lonely both Ashlee and Ryder loved it. It was so magical and everything happened there. At night it was dark and creeky but in the daytime it was open and very bright with a great veiw of the beach. Remindering herself Ashlee continued to ponder about her past. After a moment she went back to her eyes closed and thinking harder then ever. She and Ryder had been on the beach for about an hour. Though they sought to find something nothing happened. Ryder picked up a shell and examined the past of the shell. Ashlee was going to ask what she was doing but she noticed something running up towards her from down the side of the beach.
Posted on: 2009/1/25 20:39
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Cool and better update for today! Yay! The bigger font size is making me love to read more! ^_^
Posted on: 2009/1/26 5:13
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OCC: thanks alot. I appreciate the comments!
Chapter Three: Ryder snapped up in shock. Maybe it was because Ashlee was almost breathing like a lion. "Who? she questioned. "Not sure." Ashlee said as she pulled Ryder up near her and picked her up. Ryder was about eight years old. But it was just that Ashlee was really strong that she was able to pick her adorable sister up. "Stay here."Ashlee said as she pushed her sister away from her a few feet. She sighed and rushed down the beach as fast as possible at the on coming person. as she reached closer and closer she noticed that there was more then one person. About three, to be exact. Ashlee groaned and raised her eye brows as sand flew into her face. The beach as still cool as she finally was about five feet away. One of them was a boy. As he continued to run down the beach he looked behind him. Suddenly to slam into Ashlee as she ran. He looked about eighteen years old. He was basically on top of her as he gave a faint glare at her. He seemed to be wearing pretty dark clothes. His facial expression was quite strange. He looked like he wasn't a very talktive person. More quiet but cute like that in a way. Ashlee smiled as he got off of her. "Sorry." ashlee started but he stopped her. "It's me to blame." he smiled again. "I'm Chris." as he shook her hand. "Ashlee." she said. These are my friends. We're staying here for a while until we find a perminant place." he said. His friends ran up. After an interoduction Ashlee looked back at her sister who was standing firm as a stick on the beach. "You can stay with us." Ashlee laughed. "We live over there. It's pretty big. Nine bedrooms. Four restrooms. I don't know. What do you say?" she asked politly. "I say we stay."Hayley shrugged.
Posted on: 2009/1/26 16:54
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wow nice story! I am looking forward to another update! some spelling mistakes:
soemthing interoduction
Posted on: 2009/1/28 9:29
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Aw...ITs so calming. So siren ^_^
I love this story ^_^
Posted on: 2009/1/28 15:13
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Thanks for the posts. I haven't been able to get on amaranthia for a while. Soo it might be a while until I post again. Thanks, and I'll try to fix the spelling mistakes! Lol, anyways,....
Posted on: 2009/2/5 19:31
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