HAha. Great job on this story ^_^

A+/A+/A+

thanks.
i'm sorry to announce you that i didn't have much time to make a new update. i'm in the middle of exam period, so it will take some time for me to make a new update.
i think i will post a new update arround friday, or in sunday.
untill then...

i hope that you can help me with my search.
i'm looking for a web site on which i could download books for free (legaly). i need it 'cause of the lack of book titles that i want to read, and i can't ('cause in the public library there isn't any book i wan't to read, or that i havent read it). so i could really use your recomendations.
i will apreciate your help, if you can help me.
thanks in advance.

Sorry. i dont know a better place to download books legally =(

Im too busy reading this xD

This seems a bit off topic but whatever.

There's Project Gutenberg (http://www.gutenberg.org/wiki/Main_Page) that distributes free e-books. You might find something you like there. Just note that if you don't live in the United States, you need to check the copyright laws of your country before downloading or redistributing a book.

thanks for information, i apreciate it very much
in next few days i will put an update for Child of dusk.

Cool=D Good luck my pretty friend =D

i am so sorry for not putting the new update. i lost my memory stick where i was writing the child of dusk, and until i find it i won't be able to put new updates. probably my sister took it with her, last time, and not returned it.
(if it's really lost, i will probably be depressed, cause my all stories that i wrote were on that memo-stick).
wish me luck to find it fast.

finally, the new update that i promised:

Darkness was surrounding her, but she didn’t notice that. She was only aware of the noise that her horse was making during this wild run, and her thoughts were cursing her own stupidity. If something happens to him, she will be the one to blame because she left him without any proper protection. He wasn’t the wild child like she was, and that should’ve crossed her mind before she left to visit her allies.

With a smooth move, she pulled out her sword, releasing bridles, and holding the sword with both hands. Her right elbow was behind the line of her back with the other hand that held the sword paralel with her chin. Almost like she waits something to be thrown towards to her, so she can hit it and launch it sky high.

She entered forest, with the same fast run on her horse, knowing that her horse won’t get hurt, and with the rage that grew in her. Anyone who tries to hurt her friend will have to be prepared to deal with serious consequences, and one of them is that the person who have done such thing will be faceing with death herself. The light began to shine from her like a burning star, with the cold, faded-purple light.

The queen was riding for vengance.



Huntress was watching the ordinary mortal who looked up to the west, like he has heard sonething that her sensetive hearing didn’t catch. He got up to his feets and walked towards to that place, so the huntress lost her interest of watching him. She left him be, and waited the sign. One look at the leading wolvess let her know that she don’t have to move. The ruler is comeing to them.

This is getting easier, what made huntress nervous. This shouldn’t be so easy.

Something was very wrong, she could taste it.

YAY! ^_^

something is very wrong? That is very not good...
(Yay!! You found the stick!!)
Any more?

more is coming now:

Andreas was looking very worried, and his mother, the Queen, was wondering why. Did her son really cared for that disgusting and plain peasant? But why did he, then, sent her away?

She frowned, thinking that Andreas maybe guessed that that wild girl just wasn't the right choice for him. ANY girl would be wrong choice, but Andreas is too much blind to see that. So the duty of protecting Andreas from wrong choices fell on her back.

Ah, well. At least she will rule this land.


Her eyes were wide open from surprise when she saw that pale light that was approaching very fast. But more surprising was the source of the light that lightened the dark in forest. Someone who was looking like a human, was looking in nowhere special, like a blind man, and the fire in those dark eyes was almost like the real fire. Rampaging and steaming hot.

Mortal looking person stopped the horse on which was riding so, huntress realized, she looked right in to her spot. Light was shining more brightly, making the huntress nervous. Girl-woman was looking at her proudly, making her feel respect for her. not beautiful to die for, but fair enough to stay speechless for a few moments.

Pail skin, like white moon, on which was placed a pair of dark eyes, noble shape of nose, and the pail lips, just a tone more pink than her skin. Black and long eyelashes, and dark eyebrows that were placed beneath the high forehead. And it was all surrounded with long locks of her hair that were the darkest brown color that she ever saw.

Girl-woman spoke with the voice that was full of rage.

"I will not ask this twice." while speaking, she was still looking directly in huntresses eyes. "What did you do to the man that was here before i came to this place?"

She recognized the voice. She would recognize it in any time, from ancient past to the far away future. The voice of the ruler was unique and irresistible like the most powerful spell or chains made from the strongest metal that were binding her to the voices owner.

"My Queen!" huntress fell down on her knees looking helpless. "Forgive me for not taking care for your protege, but he left at his own will."

"Then i'm late." her Queen's voice filled with sadness and loss that hitted her like a punch of fate. "He is lost now."

The light died.



i hope you like this part as you did the last one.

She's late? Bad pierre! You shouldn't leave places and make Helia be late!!

(I liked it!! )

he will be fine... no worries. just a little bit changed, but fine.(tough he will not be alive, he will not be dead eather)

new update:

Beeing patient finaly paid of, but in unexpected way. There is no way that things could end up like this! Well… Maybe that was the wrong phrase, because the things begun well, as it could never had expected.

A mortal beeing was going towards to it’s direction, but mortal couldn’t see noone, even if he watched carefuly in everey direction. It’s senses cought the scent of the mortal which lifted it’s mind, forgetting about mission for a moment. The desire came uninvited, stronger then ever before. It must feed with the mortal. Craveing was inevitable, instincts took the power over the brain and mission, so it attacked.

Mortal will live no more.


“Who are you?” ruler asked with the sad voice, so huntress felt the pain in her heart too, as if the pain of her ruler was her own. “What do you want from me?” the air vibrated between the branches of the trees in dark forest, looking calmed as if nothing happened.

“I was sent to find you, My Queen. To find you and to lead you to your home, so you can finally take your birth right to rule over your people.” Huntress said looking to the ground while she was kneeling on the soft grass and fallen leaves. Queen said nothing on that so huntress raised her eyes so she can see her. She stopped glowing the light, her appearance became more mortal, but her royal eyes were harsh and full of pain.

“And you want me to trust you…” she said with despize. “You let the man who was here to go away in to his death, and you haven’t done nothing to stop it. As far as I can tell, I was going better without your help, and when you could do something to please me, you didn’t.”



this is not the all i wrote for this part, but i had to split it on two parts. i will put the other part as soon as i can.

"But, my Queen, how could i ever know that he was important to you?" huntress felt bad. "I would do that gladly, if i only knew that..."

Girl-woman sighed. "My apologies..." her voice broke down like she was on the edge of crying. "I had no right to say those tings. It was my fault that i left him, alone, in the first place. Anything that happens to him from the moment he left will be entirely my fault, and i will have to live with the gilt... And now you tell me why are you looking for me?"


Alex was looking in the distance, feeling sad when he remembered Helia. She was so full of life and laughter... How is she now? Did huntress found her already?

"Thinking of the Queen again, are you?" Nadiene asked with mild and gentle voice, as she was thinking on her too.

"I can't avoid asking myself if she's ok." he answered looking at Nadiene's eyes which were reflecting the sunlight.

"I think she's better than ok. I can feel it, so i was going to propose you a deal... what do you say that we return to the Palace of Light, and wait on her there?" Nadiene's smile turned wider.

"And we shall do just that." Alex started to laugh.

so sad...


keep updating

I can't believe I almost missed these!
Now I know what you meant by "not alive, but not dead either"
Is there any more coming anytime soon?!!

i will put the new update on Saturday Sunday. i am in the process of writing, so i will write for the next 2 or 3 updates. (so i can focus on writing my other story too)
till then

NEW UPDATE!!!

Pierre stopped moving, and he focused on hearing for something that was there in the dark. He could almost taste it, like it was just in front of him, but he couldn’t see much from the trees that were hiding most things from his eyes. Darkness also wasn’t too much helpful for him.

He started to relax, thinking that he somehow managed to fool himself that something was lurking in the dark. But then something, or someone, jumped from the hideout behind one of the trees and grabbed him tightly.

“What the…” he didn’t have enough time to say nothing more because someone put the cold hand on his mouth, shutting him up. Panic told him that he should fight to free himself somehow, but the thing was holding him too tightly for moving.

“What a scent!” whispering voice said near his ear, with a trace of delight in it’s tone, what said to Pierre that his keeper is a woman. Woman closed her nose to his hair and neck, breathing in and then she sighed from joy. He winced. “And what a young man!!! I would never expect to find you here, mortal. But I’m glad I did…” that voice was like an enchantment that Nadiene used once, but it was slightly stronger. She managed to turn him in the front of her, so he could see her face, and so she could easily hold him in a grip (which was looking like a hug), but still holding her hand over his mouth.

She was beautiful. Not like any woman he knew, but that beauty was scary. Tanned skin that was glittering on the moonlight, that managed to pierce trough the branches, showed him her magenta eyes and white hair. Her smile revealed to his eyes the truth about what creature she was.

“I was thinking on finding the partner for myself, but you just fell in to my lap like a perfect gift. I shall make you my partner for eternity, my love.” And then she bit him.

She was a vampiress.