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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #41
Offline   Rena
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It's the way he's always talking about wanting to escape and hide from his princeliness... And because it doesn't seem like the king and queen ever really do anything (we drop by unexpectedly, and they're still in the thrones XD), it seems like he's just being irresponsible.

He's also very eager to be on this adventure, even before it turns serious. (Well, he could've also just expected it to be short, but still.)

Posted on: 2009/10/8 21:02
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #42
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Hmmmm... I guess in my interpretation that entire "irresponsible" thing is erased by how much sense it makes for him to want to get away.

I admit that my interpretation happened because when I first played the game it seemed like he was being portrayed as the cliche "reluctant noble" without any reason. And then I... tried to give a reason.

Did the same for Mel, actually, and her hatred of nobles, although Marabelle did it better, funnier, and with less need for new canon in Night Falls.

Posted on: 2009/10/8 21:15
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #43
Offline   Rena
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That is true. My opinion on characters in general totally varies with my mood/what I'm reading, too, so... :/

But you're both really awesome.

Posted on: 2009/10/8 21:18
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #44
Offline   Marabelle
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Quote:

Did the same for Mel, actually, and her hatred of nobles, although Marabelle did it better, funnier, and with less need for new canon in Night Falls.

Oh, pshaw! I learn about Mel from your stories, dear Blurbie!

I did not expect to see an update to this story, so I was completely thrilled when I did! I love it! The ending in particular made me melt into a warm and contented puddle of Marabelle. I love the romantic, grown up type stuff, particularly when it's loving, as it was here.

Mel's support of Edward is truly wonderful, and makes me love her even more, and Ed's concern for involving her in a life they both hate touched me deeply. I feel so much for Edward, and the difficult responsibilities he eventually accepts.

Rhen had to face much the same thing. One could probably do quite an interesting treatise on the subject of accepting responsibility in the Aveyond universe. It seems like a major guiding force in characters, major and minor.

To wander off to Te'i for a sec, as I'm wont to do, here is a character who claims to take very little responsibility for what she does (Mel is also this way too, and a comparison between those two characters would also be intriguing, at least to me!) and yet, she takes great responsibility for what is happening to the world, and to the people she surrounds herself with, including her cranky, wayward, somewhat suicidal hubby.

Contrasts... totally fascinating... anyway, I'm rambling in my fatigue here. So, let me just say... I LOVED it! And I'm so glad you wrote more of it, because it was like literary ice cream to me on a hot August day. Yummers!

Posted on: 2009/10/8 22:55
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #45
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I didn't expect an update either. This was that... image I mentioned to you that I couldn't find the right words for. Today I managed to, or at least something close enough to get down in writing.

I did tell you I wanted to write something showing how healthy they are for each other... this was pretty much it.

Responsibility, yes, but with the interesting and weird factor of prophecy. Reponsibility mixed with fate is the idea here- You are told what you are supposed to achieve and then you... do.

Of course Te'i is somewhat different as she has no prophecy, just her own quirky sense of... ugh, word re-use much but responsibility in a different sense.



Anyway.
I'm very glad you liked it.
Thank you for the comment (I have been shamelessly waiting for it sine i posted this)

Posted on: 2009/10/8 23:09
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #46
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*laughy*

That's okay, I wait for yours too. We have quite the mutual admiration society going on. Story love triangle with Rena. I agree with you completely on the added complication of prophecy, and Te'i's sense of ... hmm... yes, responsibiliy... duty perhaps. She's clearly got some affection for the mortal world beyond the snackability of its inhabitants.

Posted on: 2009/10/8 23:12
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #47
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Story love triangle with Rena.

XD I seem to be a part of a lot of triangles, actually. New favorite shape? ^.^

I totally follow both of your comments. You just do such good analyses!

Posted on: 2009/10/8 23:17
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #48
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Oh! Those stories are great. I especially like the portrayal of Mel in the Wedding Dress. It was really well done. Hopefully you'll write more, perhaps more about Lydia? Anyways, I love how you portrayed Mel. She had another, more caring side to her in these stories, one that you don't really see in the game. It's just really nice.

But yeah, I'm hoping to see another update to this story, based on Lydia, but anything is good. It's a really great story! =D

Posted on: 2009/10/9 0:28
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #49
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I actually very much want to write a story about Lydia and I have a vague sense of what it would be if I ever got around to it.

But while she will probably receive a sympathetic portrayal, she's still going to be... Lydia. I.e. selfish, self-assured, and vain.

Posted on: 2009/10/9 1:27
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #50
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lol. I would be angry if she were not like that. That's what makes her my favorite character. XD I'm excited for that, if it will ever be. You're a really good writer. ^,^

Posted on: 2009/10/9 2:32
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #51
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Wow, Blurble! This is simply superb writing! It seems to me like you work with the few words that are given in the game and then work them into a whole new, wide background that somehow seems to be spot on! And I loved Mel's comment about the shoes! It seems she'll have to teach Edward just when not to be a worried prince!

Keep going with the stories and please, yes, do write one about Lydia! I think she has sort of the same potential Lars had in AV1 - meaning that she's totally b****y, but could actually be well liked in the forums if someone (hint, hint) wrote a story that explained where her nasty temper comes from.

Posted on: 2009/10/9 4:01
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #52
Offline   lonergirl_14
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Please write more!!!

Your story is great... but it kinda lacks something... it makes me think, "what's going to happen to the country in Mel and Edward's reign?"

You keep me hanging for a line that will never be written... *cries*

Posted on: 2009/11/13 8:19


Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #53
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Wow I think I didn;t realize people had commented here. Um. Thanks everyone

@Mayflower: Thanks, I really appreciate that since that's a lot of what I'm trying to do.

@lonergirl: I have ideas for mel/ed in 3-4 but I need that to come out before I write them so I can figure out how to them in...

Posted on: 2010/4/18 23:06
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #54
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ZOMG I didn't notice "The Balcony" Until now :o *Slaps myself* Any way Yay! I loved the balcony scene I mean the everything! And I loved the fact that she didn't wear any shoes! This is great Blurble!

Posted on: 2010/6/15 11:27
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #55
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Thanks.

Posted on: 2010/6/15 11:42
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #56
Offline   summerblue22
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i like them both you should write more

Posted on: 2010/7/12 1:16


Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #57
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Thanks

Posted on: 2010/8/28 22:54
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #58
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wee, oh.. please update this if you can. this story

Posted on: 2010/9/9 8:26
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #59
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Great story!!! I was never a fan of MelXEdward but you had converted me!!! yey!

Posted on: 2010/10/24 9:26
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Re: Wedding Dress (Gates of Night) + Balcony (also GoN) #60
Offline   Blurble
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really?

they're my favorite pairing.

I could wax rhapsodic about them for an hour, how they have such amazing chemistry and compatibility and guh.

well, I'm glad I converted you =)

Posted on: 2010/10/24 9:42
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