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Grammar mistake in the end? (Spoilers!!!!!) #1
Offline   FullMoon
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I don´t know if anyone has mentioned it before, but I think there is a little grammar mistake in the game.
Shouldn´t it be "...she will not eat..." or something like that? o:

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Posted on: 2010/12/26 3:43
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Re: Grammar mistake in the end? (Spoilers!!!!!) #2
Offline   daeva_agas
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I guess it's an attempt to emulate a poetic/old-fashioned style of writing? Kind of Shakespearean in a way, I guess? I mean, back in the old days sentences were structured in such weird ways that wouldn't make sense in modern grammar structure and stuff, but hey... who am I to talk? English is not my first language.

Posted on: 2010/12/26 8:26
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Re: Grammar mistake in the end? (Spoilers!!!!!) #3
Offline   Pallas_Athene
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No, this sentence is perfectly acceptable. In modern English, a "would" is supplied, but, as d_a mentioned, this is probably supposed to sound sort of poetic, or possibly medieval. If I'm not totally imagining this, I think older English styles actually omitted words in this manner. (I dunno about that though; I would check a grammar dictionary or Wikipedia).

Posted on: 2010/12/26 10:00
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Re: Grammar mistake in the end? (Spoilers!!!!!) #4
Offline   momma22smallbears
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Only mistake i found is in the beginning, when Nox tells Mel: “this cathedral is build like a fortress”. Probably should be "built".

Posted on: 2010/12/27 0:52
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Re: Grammar mistake in the end? (Spoilers!!!!!) #5
Offline   shaz
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It's perfectly acceptable modern English, too

(and I've just fixed the build -> built typo, thanks for mentioning it)

Posted on: 2010/12/27 1:30
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