OH!!! XD LOL thats just AWESOME. Makes much more sense now.

Hey, do you mind if I take your story and copy them onto my Word so I can read it again and again long after this thread is gone? I promise I won't post it somewhere else and say it's mine or anything. I just love your story so much!

I... um.

O_O

Please?

Well. If you promise not to repost it. Then I... guess so?

YAY! *runs off to save the story*

I don't think I'm gonna be much of a reviewer since I'm not nearly as good as you when it comes to writing fanfics. But Anyways...
Alright here me goes!:
First, I can get why you didn't use the side char's so well. But I would have liked it if they did have more screen time. And I actually would have preferred if Sirona had comeback. But I get that Rhen was suppose to move on so I guess it's okay...
Second, I didn't think the plot was that bad. It's just a little out of the place at times and that's okay. Besides even if it has some mistakes, this story rocks!
Third, Over-modernization? Well I guess I'm too dumb to figure where that came XP
Fourth, As for the RPG science thing, it was fun reading them "die" but yes I agree with you, the pass out interpretation is better.
Now for the other notes:
I never thought of it the way you did. They have to grow up after accomplishing something big. That makes a lot of sense! On the other hand I so agree with you on Lars being a mummy's boy =D And that makes him even more cute! <3 I agree with your last point completely! In the Rhen/Dameon ending, their relationship was something I never really understood. XP As for the Rhen/Danny ending, I found it would be really boring and that they don't really have that chemistry.
Well I think that's about it. Sorry I'm not much of a reviewer XP

I'm so sad its over... though it had a very sweet and cute ending. Will you start a new story?

No. Especially because I may very shortly need to take a several months hiatus from the site in which case I want as few ongoing projects as possible.

You're leaving AGAIN?????? WHYYYYYYYY?????

*sobs* but- but- nnooooo!

you...WHAT?! NO!

HOJEEZ THIS IS AWESOME. I especially love Epilogue 2. Now I can play the Aveyond sequels without feeling sad that Rhen married Dameon. c:

I love how the story progressed, and your writing was awesome. I only have problems with some grammar, but yeah. Good job!

Teehee =D
That epilogue was my response to aisling, basically. xD

O_O I absolutely, absolutely LOVE how this fic can fit perfectly in canon. I shall take this as canon now. It's so much awesomer.

@Kirroha: oh thank you *blush blush* I take that as the highest form of compliment.

I just finished this and... I LOVE IT!!! You are so gifted Blurble!

Aw... thanks.

(Wow, i thought this story was already inching its way towards the graveyard O_O)

IT NEVER WOULD!!!!

(Very rich coming from me, being that I'm sort of ignoring AV1 because Gyendal is taking over my mind right now)

Oh, it's such a wonderful piece. Deserves a bump!

my, it's been a long time since i've been here.

...i'm not interested in having my last couple of posts on this site be in the village sqaure for all perpetuity. HBT is firmly my home on aveyond, thanks very much.