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Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #1
Offline   LumenAstrum
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"Secrets will be revealed, yet the truth may be something you don't want to know..."

Bernadette Skyes is an ordinary 18-year old working student, very socialized and is popular in their area. She has always been near people and had always talked to them, but in reality, behind the mask of society, is a heart that yearned to be alone, to be herself.

Many people had wondered what had caused it, and in reality, one of the reasons is that her family had been keeping secrets from her. She grew up bearing her parents on-and-off appearance to her, and the sudden disappearance of her family members also marked into her. Depression, it seems, has marked her attitude.

For years, she have wanted to know what is the reason of all of those events in her childhood. All she was hearing is about a cult called "Crimson Cross", which had a deep connection in their family. For years, she was finding information about this cult, yet unfortunately for her, all information seems to have been buried under sad memories and despair of other people. It seems that even the persons who trust her so much hides something from her. Her many attempts of gathering information was always hindered by death threats and disappearances of other people, and sometimes she was almost killed in times.

One time though, on a busy night, she had been called by a mysterious person, stating she knows everything about the cult and her family... She didn't really want to depend to other people, yet she needs the information so much, and it seems that her aloofness was eaten up by her desire of finding out the truth... And it seems that the turn of events can possibly change her and other people's lives forever.

Characters

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Bernadette Skyes
"Independence is the window to success. Dependence and trust brings people down."
A 20 - year old student. Rich and luxurious, but then still works for her tuition since that she doesn't want to depend on her parents for technically everything. Popular and smart, but then, she never wanted to be popular, and wanted herself to be alone.

Leonard Bell
"You are lucky you even have people beside you that will always help you. I never had them."
A guy 1 year older than Bernadette. He is strong, but then he is usually an outcast on his area because his father was a member of the murder gang. He, unlike Bernadette wanted friends and a real family. Once he met Bernadette during the murder gang's session, he is willing to convince Bernadette to change.

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William Bell
"I know it's wrong, but.. I have to do it."
Leonard's father. Leonard talks about him a lot, and he seems to be an interesting person. But when Bernadette consults him about the cult attacks, he seems to know something about the one who did it to her. He refuses to talk about it though.

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June Gena Suharta
"Death makes those people happy because... well.. they're sadists."
Bernadette's simple-looking waitress at the coffeeshop she's managing. Very kind yet gets noisy at times. She bugs Bernadette a lot, but actually, she's just real concerned. She gets scared easily and she acts and thinks like a kid when it comes to morbid topics in conversations.

Alexander Bell
"If they kill, then can you tell me WHY they kill?"
Leonard's younger brother, and studies in the best college around. Is pretty weird and paranoid. He always keep a notebook close to him and never lets anybody touch it. He was pretty interested about the cult attacks and helps Bernadette in her search.

Ruchi Tanaka (Lucy)
"Flowers of the grass shows scarcely with a withered name."
A quiet Japanese girl that studies in the same college as Alexander, but takes another course. She is pretty absent-minded, and never talks unless very needed. She was one of those people who idolizes Bernadette because of her intellect. She likes poetry very much and writes haikus often.

More characters on the way~


This KN is based on my 5-stanza poem Independent, which obviously have the same title. I am making this KN because this poem had been my first ever poem that got in our poetry slam, and I have been so happy because it's my dream to get in a poetry slam even just once. So it's like my thank you. ^^

Help is appreciated. I will do the programming, sprite art, and search for the music. Background, design on the window, or story improvement is greatly appreciated. (because I suck at doing the window art I swear)

Comments and suggestions are, as usual, always appreciated.

Posted on: 2011/1/17 7:27
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #2
Offline   Elemental
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Ooooh, seems interesting~!
I'll be looking forward to this *adds to her list of games to look forward to*

Is this going to be like an RPG, visual novel, or what though? Just wondering.

By "window art", do you mean windowskins? I can *kind of* make windowskins, so depending on what you're looking for, I'd be able to help.

Posted on: 2011/1/17 10:11
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #3
Offline   slimmmeiske2
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Looks nice, but wow Bernadette's view is kind of extreme :o

Posted on: 2011/1/17 10:24
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #4
Offline   daeva_agas
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Off topic question, but what is "KN"?

I'm just boggled over the number of home-made games Amaranthians make. I look at the RMXP window and it gives me spirally eyes

Posted on: 2011/1/26 21:23
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #5
Offline   LumenAstrum
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Quote:

daeva_agas wrote:
Off topic question, but what is "KN"?

I'm just boggled over the number of home-made games Amaranthians make. I look at the RMXP window and it gives me spirally eyes


"KN" means "Kinetic Novel". ^o^
Kinda like Jisei without branching storyline and endings. ^^

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slimmmeiske2 wrote:
Looks nice, but wow Bernadette's view is kind of extreme :o

Yeah, she's a great woman ^_^

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Elemental wrote:

Ooooh, seems interesting~!
I'll be looking forward to this *adds to her list of games to look forward to*

Is this going to be like an RPG, visual novel, or what though? Just wondering.

By "window art", do you mean windowskins? I can *kind of* make windowskins, so depending on what you're looking for, I'd be able to help.


Text box. Kinda like in RMXP and VX, the frame. ^^

Thank you for your support~

Posted on: 2011/1/27 6:28
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #6
Offline   sana96
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This is nice! I agree with elemental, it's very interesting! A KN, huh? Well that's cool! I like the logo~ Good Luck, and lookin' forward to the entire game! Will you be releasing a demo? You are making the character sketches yourself, right? Bernadette's sketch looks nice! =D

Posted on: 2011/1/27 7:40


Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #7
Offline   LumenAstrum
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Quote:

sana96 wrote:
This is nice! I agree with elemental, it's very interesting! A KN, huh? Well that's cool! I like the logo~ Good Luck, and lookin' forward to the entire game! Will you be releasing a demo? You are making the character sketches yourself, right? Bernadette's sketch looks nice! =D

Thank you so much!

Yeah, I will be releasing a demo, which I calculate will be only 5-10 minutes short XDDD

I think the

But I still (first!) need to finish Leonard's sprite XD

I don't have any problem with music, other graphics (like background) and gameplay and story, so that's why this weekend, I'll try to finish that damn sprite >_>

Posted on: 2011/1/27 7:49
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"Whatever reality gives, whether hardships or glory; I'll be here for you..."


Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #8
Offline   sana96
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Haha, lookin' forward to Leonard's sprite! xD Will we see some other characters in the demo as well?

Posted on: 2011/1/27 11:59


Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #9
Offline   Elemental
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Ooooh, that sounds interesting, then. I've never really played a visual novel, so this'll be fun.

If you send me the default text box, and some idea of what you want, I can try to whip something up. (Depending what you'd want, that is)

Posted on: 2011/1/27 16:34
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #10
Offline   LumenAstrum
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@Sana : Other characters? I think the only character related in the plot that will be in the demo is Leonard's father. And Bernadette's boss, that is XDDD They will only have CGs though. No sprites. >_>

@Elemental : No need! It's just a 800x150 black graphic which is set in 75% opacity XD

Posted on: 2011/1/28 5:52
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #11
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Okay. XD ^^

Posted on: 2011/1/28 16:04
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #12
Offline   LumenAstrum
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Here's the new (and better?) sprite for Bernadette:

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I worked on it on a small resolution that's why the lines looked weird.
Next : LEONARD!

Posted on: 2011/2/5 21:50
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #13
Offline   Elemental
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Ooooh, I like it!

Can't wait to see Leonard's.

Posted on: 2011/2/6 9:39
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #14
Offline   sana96
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Yeah, Bernadette looks better! Now I wanna see Leonard~

Posted on: 2011/2/6 16:18


Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #15
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Looks great, and just like the others looking forward to see Leonard. ^^

Posted on: 2011/2/7 9:58
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #16
Offline   LumenAstrum
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I am planning to repeat my drawing of Leonard...

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It doesn't look THAT good. >_>

(Highlight below for (major?) spoilers)

All I can say is that
her attitude is caused by a childhood event

and that
Leonard would be close to Bernadette, and he'll be a younger version of a stalker

plus to the fact that
Leonard's father is a freelance murderer (kills just because he feels like it) and he had killed almost everyone of his son's friends (mostly girls), that's why people stay away from him from the fear of getting killed.

I hope I didn't reveal too much.

Posted on: 2011/2/8 5:54
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #17
Offline   slimmmeiske2
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Ooooh, that's very interesting, Iya!

Posted on: 2011/2/8 11:24
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #18
Offline   Elemental
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Oooooh. Not too much, but enough to get me REALLY EXCITED~! XD

Also, the sketch is good, but if you want to re-do it, re-try until you're satisfied.

Posted on: 2011/2/8 16:49
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #19
Offline   sana96
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MP : 768 / 13414
Yeah, I'm really excited as well! I like the story line it's seems so exciting! xD I think the sketch looks good. He just seems a little too young for 21. Maybe that's 'cause your only showing his face?

Posted on: 2011/2/9 4:53


Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust #20
Offline   LumenAstrum
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Leonard is HERE!

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Posted on: 2011/2/11 9:06
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