Tooth-chan, please put it up! I know you have it written...

Nice story

nice keep updating

avey, please!!!! put up the next update sitting in your notebook! please? PLEASE?!?!?!

I'm sorry guys, lately I'm just not in the mood for getting everything onto the computer *sighs* and when I get my new computer, I might get everything on here, I've got a lot written... even started on E.A.B.H 3 its called I wish I could forget, its about Nigel... he'll come later in E.A.B.H 2.

ohhhkkk i think hiccup was right...

what was she right about?

fishy-chan is saying I was right about you starting EABH 3, which is completely rediculous, considering you have just barely started the second one

^^ I'm probably going to just stop at the end of eabh 2

no u have to keep wrighting, its a great story, something i actually want and like to read and i hate reading. keep writeing

^^ I'm going to keep writing guys, just not E.A.B.H 3. Though I AM GOING TO FINISH EABH 2

so go finish it toothy-chan!!!

noo not until I finish reading fang

your done!!! post post post! please?

still havent gotten it onto the computer yet...

I'm so glad I started reading this!! I adore your writing!!! I'll wait forever if I have to, but I simply can't wait for an update!! I'll become your slave if you want me to just hurry up with it. God I feel like such an addict. xD

@memozia thanks!

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The way Avey looks at it is that a villain is always there if not one than another. They have their ways… of coming back.



Part 4 I’m Back!


“Come here 56!” Jay ordered, snapping her fingers. 56 bowed, ready for his assignment.
Jay held a dagger between two fingers pretending to examine it. “I need you to find Lars Tenobor, and his friends. Destroy them… remember, you are always disposable.” She grinned evilly and dismissed her minion. She was planning on getting rid of that minion any ways, right after she was finished using it, it would be thrown to her new pet.

“hahaha, soon… revenge, and the world will be mine.” The thirteen year old girl cackled to herself, as if no one else was there. But in her mind, she was the only one there because she couldn’t depend on anyone else in the room, they were all just puppets. “All those fools think I’m dead, morons.”

She threw a dagger at the huge map hanging on the wall. “Watch out Lars, I’m back. And I’m stronger and more powerful than before. I’m your worst nightmare. You’ll fear me this time…”

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They way Avey looks at it is that each person’s personality is unique and it should be respected. Someone should never try to change it for their own reasons.

Part 5 visions of the past, present, and future.

That next day was terrible; I couldn’t get the words “I’m back” out of my mind. Even the group’s new addition didn’t get those two words from playing and replaying in my head.

“Lars, are you ok?” Rhen asked and I jumped, “No, I’m ok.” I gave her a reassuring smile, and she frowned, I didn’t fool her.

“No, I can tell, something’s bothering you.” She said, glaring at me, “what’s wrong?”

I laughed to myself in my mind, what had I been thinking, Rhen knew me better than I knew myself. Besides, she had her locket…. “I can’t get the words ‘I’m back’ out of my head. They replay in my mind with a voice I know, I just can’t place it. Then I sense something wrong with what is going on, there is something happening that we don’t know of, we are in the dark, they have an advantage over us. And not being able to place that voice is driving me nuts.” I glanced around the tavern, but I didn’t see anyone to fit with the voice.

Rhen smiled, and then she started to giggle, “Lars you’re far, far too paranoid! Its like you think we can’t fight squat!” she had a impish grin on now, “and if your not confident in your magic, I will always be powerful enough to protect all of us, because everyone knows that I’m far better at fighting that a certain sorcerer wearing a blue cloak…”

I also grinned and stood up, “you better run sword singer.” She shot up from her seat and bolted for the door. I ran after her, I had a perfect plan, a way to get out of carrying the backpack for a few days.

I soon caught up to her as she tried to catch her breath on top of a grassy hill; I pinned her down and told her that I wouldn’t let her up until she promised to carry the pack for two days.

“You’re so evil!” Rhen laughed but finally gave in “fine! But your going to regret this!” she said, and I helped her to her feet.


That night I had a dream that I was standing on nothing and images where spinning around me. Memories were popping up, Rhen sitting on me saying “you know I’m faster,” then leaning down kissing me cheek. The picture froze and flipped over showing a card, the 1 of hearts. (author note: Yes, I know there isn’t really a 1 of hearts, but this is my story so deal with it.) The card shrunk to normal card size and fell into my outstretched hand.

The next image was of Rhen tending to my wounds in a cave as a blizzard went on outside. Again it turned into a card the picture on one side and the two of hearts on the other.

AND BECAUSE AVEY DOESN”T WANT TO WRITE A PARAGRAPH FOR ALL 52 CARDS I’LL JUST LIST THEM. OK?

1 of hearts – Rhen kissing Lars’s cheek
2 of hearts – Rhen tending to Lars’s wounds
3 of hearts – Rhen rejecting Rowan
4 of hearts – Rhen and Lars watching a sunset on a cliff before the big battle
5 of hearts – Rhen stabbing Dameon
6 of hearts – Te’ijal crying on the ground with shattered glass all around her
7 of hearts – Rhen running through the streets in a ruined wedding dress
8 of hearts – Rhen and Lars fighting back to back
9 of hearts – Lars saying sorry
10 of hearts Lars stabbing Ahriman
Queen of hearts – Rhen
King of hearts – Lars
Ace of hearts – Te’ijal
Jack of hearts – Galahad

1 of diamonds – Dameon betraying the party
2 of diamonds – Lars in pain from one of Dameon’s mind attacks
3 of diamonds – Dameon trying to buy Rhen and Lars from Jay
4 of diamonds – Dameon coming out a tunnel
5 of diamonds – Ahriman battling the party
6 of diamonds – Jay dragging Rhen and Lars through a forest
7 of diamonds – Jay holding a dagger to Rhen’s neck
8 of diamonds – Rowan talking to the kidnapped Rhen
9 of diamonds – Lars ‘killing’ Jay in a tavern
10 of diamonds – The Sedona guards
Queen of diamonds – Jay
King of diamonds – Dameon
Ace of diamonds – Rowan
Jack of diamonds – Ahriman

1 of spades – Rhen’s pale, lifeless face, and a spilt glass lying close to her limp hand
2 of spades – Lars with black magic surrounding his dead body
3 of spades – Te’ijal lying dead on a beach blood running into the ocean
4 of spades – Galahad with a sword piercing his heart
5 of spades – A girl ghost lying dead at the bottom of a cliff
6 of spades – A boy ghost with an arrow in his heart
7 of spades – The Oracle dead in her bed
8 of spades – a small, ragged boy sitting behind bars, crying
9 of spades – many people dead on a battle field
10 of spades – Jay with a crown on her head
Queen of spades – poison
King of spades – magic
Ace of spades – blood
Jack of spades – sword


1 of clubs – Rhen on a hill covered with flowers, smiling
2 of clubs – Lars and Rhen smiling and laughing
3 of clubs – Te’ijal the president of the underworld council
4 of clubs – Galahad guarding the streets of a town
5 of clubs – The ghost girl becoming the Oracles apprentice
6 of clubs – The ghost boy telling stories to a group of children
7 of clubs – The Oracle watching kids run around
8 of clubs – The ragged boy standing next to Rhen and Lars
9 of clubs – People happy as they do their shopping and work
10 of clubs – A little girl with pink ringlets sitting on a thrown
Queen of clubs – little girl
King of clubs – little boy
Ace of clubs – Oracle
Jack of clubs– Happy people

Joker 1: Ghost girl
Joker 2: Ghost boy


(author note: this list is going to be used again so always remember to come back and look anytime you need to.)

so...whats next? btw avey, this is very good, I can't wait for more!

huh? thanx