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|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#71|
Ok people so you know how I changed most of the first parts? well I was wondering if you would like me to post the old ones with the redone ones?
'cause I still have the old ones, like a version one and two, so if you had liked the onld version better... any way you get my point...
Posted on: 2009/10/3 21:17
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#72|
(If the first part is confusing its ‘cause Lars doesn’t know he is human again yet. Sort’a weird but, all in all... it shout be self-explanatory.) also when Gyendal turns bad in av3 in my story it is because, Gretchen died and he is really mad, I no really weird, but it works.
Saved from frog stats.
The next morning I felt strange, a tear slipped down my face, human if only I could be human again. Everything didn’t seam as big today, maybe it was because I had slept in the big bed, I don’t know.
I walked into the kitchen, rubbing my eyes someone gasped. Everyone seamed to be in a good mood. The chair seamed smaller and I got a big breakfast.
“What’s going on? The prince wants to know.” I asked.
Rhen chuckled. “You know your human again right?” She half smiled. My mouth dropped open.
“Human! How?” I asked smiling, I looked down and my hand was normal. Everything was back to normal! Rhen blushed.
“Rhen saved you.” Te’ijal said. Not giving away anything specific. But I didn’t need to know, why would I all that mattered was that I was human! The thought that Rhen was the one to save me just made it better.
I ate all my food, it surprised my how hungry I was, Gretchen said it was because I hadn’t eaten much as a frog so being a human the food amount stayed the same, therefore making it as if I had only eaten one meal in the last few days. Was it just me or was Rowan really upset?
I took a really long bath and during it I looked around, my back wound was healed! So was my arm, I no longer hurt all over... and I hadn’t heard from Dameon in a long time. I reached to my neck, feeling something cold and hard there. I touched it and a wave of warmth fell over me.
My locket, it hadn’t sent me anything from the light, Rhen’s locket in a long time it now spoke up.
“The light is very happy. So very glad that the dark is back.” It said, I grinned I’d never get over the way it sounded.
“Can you reply to the light for me?” I asked it.
“I can do that. What is the message?” It asked.
“Well tell her that I so very glad that she’s happy, and tell her I’m happy too, and I’m still wondering how she got me back to be a human.” I told it and smiled, maybe she would throw Rowan out now. The locket startled me.
“Well she says that maybe some other day, she might tell you how you became human again... but not today.” It said, I sneered. Oh well, I’d get it out of her someday, I always did.
I dried off and put my cloak on, the blue one, and my cloak. It felt amazing, like flowing water on my skin. My staff felt more powerful than it had in a long time; it wasn’t amazingly strong, but not weak like it use to be.
I walked out of the bathroom; Rhen was waiting outside the door, in tears. I stood there stunned as she took one step and fell on me, giving me a really big hug, still tears falling down her face. She didn’t let go, just kept hugging me.
“What’s wrong?” I whispered into her ear, hugging her back. She shook her head that was still on my shoulder.
“Nothing... nothing. It’s just, so good to have you back.” She said. Tears started to fall from my eyes, “Its good to be back, I missed you.” I said. Everything went black as I shut my eyes, tears still sliding down my face. This was the saddest, happiest hug I’d ever experienced.
We finally broke apart both in tears, I smiled, and she smiled back. Nothing could have made that moment better.
I walked down the hall with her, and when we entered the kitchen all heads turned towards us.
“What’s up with you two?” Te’ijal asked, seeing tears fall down both of our faces. “Did your puppy just die?” She added.
“Nothing is wrong, just a best friends moment.” Rhen said moving to go eat some chocolate, ‘cause everyone knows chocolate makes you feel really good, unless you eat too much.
“Besides we don’t even have a puppy.” I said and moved to join Rhen and grabbed some chocolate.
“Well are you going to tell us or not?” Elini asked.
“Ummm... how about not? Just a happy moment.” I said. I mean what else could I tell them? I didn’t even know how to explain what had just happened.
The rest of the day was painful, we had to say goodbye to Gretchen and Gyendal. It turned out that Gyendal proposed to Gretchen. We were all shocked, especially Te’ijal, but we got over it.
We left a smile on all our faces, well all our faces except Rowan. We stopped at a café for lunch and it was kina nice. We sat at a round table/booth at a far end of the room. I sat next to Rhen who sat next to Rowan, she didn’t seam to want to sit next to him, but she couldn’t tell him to move.
The waiter came and we ordered our food.
Rhen: salad, steak, mash potato, and ice tea.
Te’ijal: steak, steak, and more steak, with also some ice tea. (Huh, not blood well that odd.)
Galahad: Shrimp, fish, and something else that was seafood, and wine.
Mad Marge: Coconut salad, coconut covered corn, and coconut milk.
Elini: Spaghetti, and ice water.
Pirate John: also spaghetti and ice water.
Rowan: escargot, vinegar chips, and eww... that all sounded gross! Just royalty sense of taste!
Me: Corn, mash potatoes, and ice tea. Yum.
Our food arrived like an hour later, and we all ate, not speaking for a long time. Finally we had enough in our stomachs to speak. We had a joyful conversation about things that had been happening. Later where we were all getting out of our seats, Rowan threw up, Right on Rhen’s shoe.
“Watch it!” Rhen snapped.
“Sorry my lady!” Rowan said, and Rhen’s face softened, and my locket spoke up. Now remember that I am the only one who can hear my locket.
“She is thinking of the time when Elini splattered her and you with hot coco.” It said, it sounded like it was chuckling. I smiled and slapped rowans back as I passed him.
“We all do it sometimes, though for other reasons, like exhaustion, and being kicked in the stomach.” I said. He snarled, and glared at me in such a way that only I could see it. He hated me with all he had. I could feel it.
When we got outside, I knelt down and with a paper towel I had gotten inside wiped off Rhen’s shoe. “Thank you Lars!” She said. I got up and smiled at her, the sticky wonderful sad happy moment from earlier playing in my head. My best friend, she’d always be my best friend, forever.
We were standing on a cliff looking down at Witches and vampires preparing for battle, I had a sudden urge to jump off. So I did. I fell and fell hearing Rhen scream and Te’ijal hiss. Just before I hit the bottom I put my staff in the air above me dark power shooting from it. I was surrounded in darkness, looking like a shadow or silhouette rising from the ground.
I spun in the air, around and around, darkness spinning from me, light and darkness swirling around my locket, a burst of electricity shot down my staff, swirling it with dark and light. The orb on top of it was light and dark, no longer red.
The gasps of the others were lost to my in my dark mist, my head snapped back and my face turned pale, almost white. My eyes sprung open dark and light swirling in them like flames, very creepy looking.
Then I was falling, darkness subsiding, but still around me I fell to the ground in front of my friends, I lay still my face still white, my eyes still open and light and dark still swirling in them. I lay sprawled out, staff still having electricity coming out of it. Rhen’s locked was shining brightly too.
Her locket drew Rhen to me; she knelt down and with one shaky finger touched the blue stone in the middle of my locket. Darkness shot up her arm and soon her face turned pale and her eyes had the same flame like darkness and light dancing in them.
An echoed sound in my head said, “The light is connected to the dark, everything happens for a reason Lars... Everything has a purpose... don’t forget that... I leave you now Lars.... the light and dark will be one... someday, all thoughts as one and far away still heard, over seas, and land, ice or flames. Nothing can destroy it, nothing but you.”
In side of Rhen’s head, “Dark is connected to the light, everything happens for a reason Rhen... Everything has a purpose... Do not forget that... I leave you now Rhen... The dark and light will be one... someday, all thoughts as one and far away still hears, over seas, and land, ice or flames. Nothing can destroy it, nothing but you.”
Back to Lars
Everything was, dark yet light at the same time. To bright and far to dark, I hear someone calling me, Rhen. “Lars, what just happened.” Yet her mouth didn’t move, the voice had come from me, my mind.
Then it was over, the light from my staff and dark from myself, and all went into my locket. My face returned to normal, so did Rhen’s and I stood up. Confidence, and power, I was back, but more powerful than ever. My staff was now black and little streaks of light danced on it.
Lets just say Rowan didn’t look pleased, but Rhen, Te’ijal and the others were. I had my powers back, they all could tell.
Posted on: 2009/10/4 14:02
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#73|
We headed down to Te’ijal’s old burnt down house; there were fifty vampires there. When they saw Te’ijal they started backing away, but Te’ijal shouted for them to stop.
“Fallor, what are you doing here!” Te’ijal grabbed her cousin by the arm and wouldn’t let go.
“Nothing. What are you doing here?” Fallor said sneering.
“None of your business!” Te’ijal let go of Fallor’s arm.
“Oh I do believe it is my business, and if you don’t tell me I’ll hurt you! You won’t even be able to defend yourself, you always were the weak one of the family.” Fallor said, showing his fangs. I rolled my eyes.
“Oh I see that green one has an attitude problem! Don’t roll your eyes boy!” Fallor scowled.
“Well your not getting anything our of me Fallor. But I need some answers from you.” Te’ijal crossed her arms; she was slightly smaller than Fallor, and the rest of the vampires with him. Galahad stepped up behind Te’ijal resting a hand on her shoulder and saying. “We should just go.”
“You are asking for it Te’ijal, I could really hurt you...” Fallor prodded. I groaned, we could be here all day... Fallor grabbed me.
“What?” He hissed, I stood there in front of him, my arms crossed.
“Well first of all Te’ijal could flick you all the way to the other end of the under world, and the rest of us could kill you with no problem. I really don’t think it would be good if you tried to fight us...” I said this made Fallor even madder, and he motioned for the others to get ready to fight us, just what I had wanted.
We formed a group, I was good enough to make Rowan, and Mad Marge stay behind us, I mean they would have like died the first second. Rhen, Te’ijal, and I formed the front, Rhen and Te’ijal thought I should be in the back, just in case my powers weren’t back, but I wanted to try them out.
This was too easy! I held out my staff and black mist came from it, surrounding one of them. They turned to ash in the first second. We moved through the crowd, and I turned fifteen into ash, Te’ijal was grinning at me, Rhen gave me a high five as we battled side by side.
Elini and Pirate John were protecting Rowan and Mad Marge, I heard Rowan say once “But she’ll die out there!” And Elini snort, “She could kill that whole group herself, there just doing this for practice.” But then I moved on and couldn’t hear them any more.
It was over in about ten minutes leaving only Fallor standing, Te’ijal had said not to kill him.
“What... but you were the odd weak one... Always looking at the light...” He was breathing hard, and looked like he would pass out.
“Not weak any more.” Te’ijal shrugged. “None of us are weak. Now tell me what were you searching the ashes of my house for?”
“Um... an artifact.” He said finally catching his breath.
“What artifact?” Te’ijal said pointing to me, telling me to be ready to turn him to ash, Fallor saw this and confessed.
“A soul! That’s all! Just a soul!” He said looking at me with disgust.
“Just a soul! Just! Let me tell you soul are worth something, worth something to the ones who have them. You should learn that, they are important. Now who’s soul were you looking for?” Te’ijal’s eyes lit with anger.
“Why should I tell you?” He said crossing his arms.
“Because I’ll kill you if you don’t! Now who was it?”
“Ahriman.” Fallor answered. Te’ijal had taken Ahriman’s soul when he died, no one knew where she had put it, but I now guessed that when she went to burn her house she had thrown the soul in and it was destroyed.
“Well its gone, forever. Why do you want it?” She told him.
“Dameon wants it, you do know who Dameon is right?” Fallor looked like he was getting frustrated.
“Curse you cousin, you should not have spoken with that half brained fool! Never shall you live again if the other vampires hear of this, they are ready to destroy Dameon and all humans.” With that we turned and walked away.
After a one mile I noticed a tear falling down Te’ijal’s cheek, she was crying! Te’ijal actually crying!
“What?” I fell into step next to her, Rhen joined me, she had been listening to Rowan jabber on about something and had gotten really bored.
“I need to see if my older siblings are alive, I have to find them.” She said and started coughing. I nodded, I wasn’t going to stop her, no one was I would make sure of that.
“Next stop, Te’ijal’s brother and sister!” Rhen said we turned a corner and opened the gateway. We climbed up and out the light was blinding even though it was raining. We were soaked in the first minute.
There was mists all over and we slowly made our way to a library in Veldarah, Te’ijal then asked the person working there if they had a record of citizens, they did and we started to flip through the pages.
After an hour we finished looking through the book, Te’ijal’s brother and sister weren’t in it. We waited at Shadwood Academy till the rain had slowed enough then headed to the southern isle, the book had held all the citizens on the eastern isle, and they weren’t there.
None of us were up for any more cold weather, so heading to the northern isle was out, besides we were pretty sure they weren’t there. Our search for them ended at the Velt, Te’ijal was so happy.
I knocked on the door, at first nothing but then a lady opened it.
“Kemmie?” Te’ijal asked. Although Kemmie should have been dead, her vampire life span stayed the same, so had her brothers.
“Yes?” Kemmie said, and then noticed that Te’ijal was a vampire. “Te’ijal!” She shouted and ran over to her rapping her in a hug. Rallite came running and also grabbed Te’ijal into a hug. They were all crying and smiling, Te’ijal looked so happy.
Two hours later we were eating dinner in Kemmie’s and Rallite’s dining room, everyone was so happy, Te’ijal was happy to see her siblings and we were happy to see Te’ijal happy. We stayed one week with them, but eventually had to leave, a world to save from a half headed guy and all.
Everyone was sad to go, but we had to. The plan was to go back to Sedona, and stock up before a battle with the witches and vampires. Mad Marge left us, she said that battle just wasn’t for her and was going to go work for the squirrels.
We were sad to see her go, but she really wanted to and we didn’t want her to get hurt in the end battle. So we departed, she took a passenger ship, and we waved until we couldn’t see the ship anymore.
The oracle appeared on the ship to speak to us, thought I was feeling sea sick and so was Rhen, and I think it might have been connected with the lockets. I’m guessing that pain can be shared through them, or transferred from one to the other.
“You aren’t finished, Dameon is growing stronger, you need to get to the items he is getting before he does, he has people connected to him all over the world. So they get the item and he comes and picks it up, then makes potions with them. Their potions make him stronger, and give him power. The locations should mainly be by the shores, now move little ones! You have work to do!” Then she disappeared. I wasn’t too happy about her calling us little ones, but the seasickness over took me and I had to go lay down.
A sudden jolt awakened me, I was thrown from my bed and onto the floor, rolling around and I hit a wall. I got on my hands and knees, I could hear Rhen groaning, she also had been thrown from her bed. I walked quickly down the corridor, stopping at the girl’s room. I opened the door, Rhen was lying on the ground Groaning.
I Ran over to her, the ship gave another jolt and she crumpled into a ball. She hit the other wall, I winced that had to have hurt. I grabbed her hauling her to her feet she clung to my arm. We walked fast to the upper deck and were soaked with salty water, Te’ijal had managed to stay on her feet and was looking over the edge.
“What is happening?” I shouted to be heard.
“Sea monster!” Elini yelled running down the deck, “Te’ijal, Lars I’m going to need your help! Quick to the end of the ship!” She ordered. Rhen was still clinging to me and ran with me to the end of the ship.
Rowan came out and yelled, “This is terrible! What an outrage! What is going on?” I rolled my eyes and stopped at where Te’ijal and Elini were standing.
“We are going to use magic! Elini you go first!” Te’ijal yelled. Elini used all her magic, but the sea monster kept attacking. “Your powers aren’t doing anything to it! I’ll try next!” Te’ijal’s words just reached me when they were whisked away again. Te’ijal tried all her magic it had no effect.
“Go Lars quick! Do whatever just do something!” Elini screamed.
I held out my staff and murmured the words ‘iz kattor vammish!’ it meant black flame, black flames shot from my hand hitting the monsters face, darkness fell over it and it was still, dead. Rhen looked up at me, and a look of astonishment over came her. Sickness went through me and I leaned over the side of the boat and threw up.
We reached the port hours later, with bruises and aching bones, most of us had gotten knocked around allot. We ran down the docks looking for a ship called the J-shadow, it was between the final goodbye and the mace. A man was on deck and we jumped on behind him, he whirled around.
“What do shu swant?” He asked with a weird accent.
“We want the items. The ones for Dameon.” Rhen said stiffly. The man snapped his fingers and people with weapons game on deck.
“Ohhh, but such a pretty face should not deal with such dangerous things!” He said making Rhen really mad.
“This pretty face can kill you with a swipe of her sword, now hand them over!” Rhen said straitening up from the place where she had landed. The man sneered, my turn to comment. “You are really bad at speaking and sneering!” I told him, making his face turn red. Have I mentioned how I do not like pink or red skin?
The others started battling and Rhen and I searched the deck, it wasn’t up there. One thing left to do, go under. We ran to the hatch and hopped down, we stopped at several rooms, and it wasn’t there. We reached the captains office and entered. There sitting in the chair behind the desk with her feet up on the table, spinning a dagger was Jay.
“Oh, good your just in time. She snapped her fingers and someone grabbed Rhen, dragged her behind the counter and gagged her. Jay stood up and stepped over to where Rhen was being held captive. Someone grabbed my staff and brought it to Jay. I could feel fear, and anger in my locket, coming from Rhen.
“You see Lars I have a bigger part in this than you thought.” Jay said testing the dagger on her finger blood spurted out and she grinned. “If you don’t join me, Rhen’s pretty little neck wont be anymore.” She said holding the dagger to Rhen’s throat. I saw panic on Rhen’s face; she looked at me, helplessly.
“Anything! Just don’t hurt her!” I said, my throat feeling tight. Jay pressed the dagger closer to Rhen’s neck.
“Anything?” She asked, snarling.
“Yes! Just don’t hurt her!” I practically screamed. She pressed the dagger a little closer, and a tiny drop of blood came from Rhen’s neck, she winced. I wouldn’t let this happen, I closed my eyes and thought hard; it was really difficult to do anything with out my staff.
“Tar Ven strak” I said, holding out my hand towards Jay. She dropped the dagger, grasping at her neck pulling at the invisible thing that choked her, so did the guard holding Rhen captive. Rhen pulled out the gag and ran to me wrapping her arms around me. She was crying, I patted her hair, awkwardly and looked toward Jay, she looked scared.
“You gave me no choice. You will die now.” I told her and she fell to the floor her face turning gray. I had just killed Jay, and it bothered me, in a way.
Rhen finally let go of me and looked where I was looking, she saw Jay dead on the floor. “What did you do?” She asked.
I swallowed, “I killed her, but it was her or you.” I shook my head and grabbed Rhen’s arm walking to the still body of Jay, I knelt down and took a bottle that she had been holding from her hand. I said ‘Dameon’ on the front; I stood up and dropped it. It shattered on the floor.
We walked back on deck Rhen clinging to me, a trickle of blood running down her neck. It turned out she was the only one to even get a scratch the others had been fine. Of course Te’ijal questioned us and I had to tell the whole story, it wasn’t that long just... oh never mind.
The point was that we had stopped the first ship, and Dameon wouldn’t get his potion.
Posted on: 2009/10/4 23:08
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#74|
We headed to our house it took us twenty minutes because people kept stopping us wanting us to buy cheese. We ended up buying like forty and gave them all to beggars. Rhen then saw an advertisement for a ballet and insisted we go, she said that it could help our fighting. Though I was like... how?
That night we sat in red plush seats watching people jump across a stage in uncomfortable clothing and looking silly. I asked Rhen why she had wanted to go and she said that she thought it would have been more interesting.
“Hey maybe this one will be better!” Rhen exclaimed pointing to a spot on the program, it was up next. “It says fight at dawn.” It turned out that fight at dawn was two people dancing, one suppose to be day and the other night, and the night didn’t want day to come and the day did want day to come. It was really dumb.
I groaned as the next one came, song of the swans... have you ever heard a swan? They don’t sound that great. They met their standards they danced just as well as a swan sings. There were thirteen left and by now we were all fidgeting and groaning.
“Do you think we could sneak out?” I asked Rhen shook her head.
“We have the front row...” Rhen rolled her eyes as some people dressed as little forest animals came on stage, leaping and spinning and stuff.
“We could like leave one at a time... and then run?” Te’ijal asked, looking at the ballet dancers like they were chocolate cookies. Rhen handed me the bag of popped corn and I grabbed some. Rowan was the only one seaming to enjoy any of it muttering something about culture of the century.
“Good idea.” Rhen agreed, “Te’ijal you go first. Meat us in the lobby.” Te’ijal stood up and made her way to the isle, then walked upward to the curtain that lead to the lobby and snack counter.
She slipped out and we waited two minutes and let Elini go fallowed by pirate John. Rhen insisted that we wait longer, so we wouldn’t look odd. Finally we shoved Rowan out of his seat and forced him and Galahad to go to the lobby. Six minutes after that we fallowed, we heard someone say, “Hey it that those people who were raiding the ship earlier?”
I breathed a sigh of relief when we joined the others. That had been awful. As we walked out the door the guards bowed at Rowan, I rolled my eyes and kept walking. Rowan stopped and started speaking to the guard, Galahad stomped back to him, and of course it had to start raining.
“Come on Rowan.” Galahad said grabbing Rowan’s shoulder.
“I am speaking to citizens of Sedona, do not bother me.” Rowan shrugged off Galahad’s hand.
“Come now, it is raining we need to get home.” Galahad told him, he didn’t listen.
“I will only be a minute.” Rowan looked at Galahad and turned back to the guard. “You were saying?”
“Come now!” Galahad grabbed Rowan’s arm.
“Hay you! The prince doesn’t want to be bothered!” The guard yanked Galahad around. I snickered; the guard was out in less than five seconds down on the ground and out cold. Galahad grabbed Rowan and dragged him over to us.
“Run!” He shouted. The guards were after us, we could have just beat them us... but... they weren’t bad guys so we went going to. There were now puddles on the streets it was raining so hard, and we trumped through them like there was death chasing us.
We lost the guards and stopped in front of our house, breathing hard and smiling. I had almost forgotten the vampires and witches planning to destroy all humans, but I didn’t. All our hair was wet and clung to our faces, all of us had mud up to our knees, and our boots were soaked through.
I could feel my lockets power spinning inside it, if only things could be so simple, so easy, but nothing stayed that way for long, it never did. If my locket held secretes then what would happen? If the I destroyed the bond between the two... But some of the brightest moments are on cloudy days.
Rowan looked at Rhen the whole time we spun around and stood in the rain, everyone did it accept him. The next afternoon he self to visit speak to his father and mother. Elini, Rhen and I stayed home while the others went to stop a ship. Later around nine Rowans came back looking pleased.
Rowan walked into the living room where she was standing, she stood up. “Hello Rowan.” She said. Lars and Elini weren’t there they had gone to the port to see if the others had returned.
“Rhen I have a question.” Rowan said walking over to her.
“Yes...?” Rhen said cautiously.
“Umm... would you do the honor of being my queen?” He asked. He held out a little box with a ring in it.
Rhen stared at the ring, not knowing where he had just gone. Lars and Elini walked to the door and Lars leaned on the doorframe Elini behind him. He had a feeling Rowan would do this tonight. Roan was kneeling on the ground in front of Rhen holding out a ring.
“No.” Rhen said. Rowan looked shocked.
“What?” He asked.
“I said no. You are dismissed from our party.” Rhen folded her arms and looked down at Rowan.
I could believe my ears had Rhen just said no? I half smile appeared on my face, AND she had also told him to leave the party! I looked back at Rowan kneeling there stunned. I walked over and hauled him up, “Leave.” I told him and he hurried to the door.
“You’ll regret this!” He yelled back. Not likely I thought. He slammed the door behind him and it opened again a few second later and Te’ijal stepped in with the others.
“What’s wrong with Rowan?” She asked. I smiled.
“Rhen kicked him out.” I told her, Rhen smiled too.
“He wanted me to marry him.” She added, and shook her head, “How stupid of him, if he thinks for one minute that a warrior is going to sit around all day and listen about politics he doesn’t know a thing about me.”
“So did you stop the ship?” I asked. Te’ijal nodded and we all went to go eat dinner, which was really late... Spaghetti!
Posted on: 2009/10/5 20:01
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#75|
Oh, Avey, it's brilliant! Can't wait for more... you're getting to be such a good writer, I didn't think you had it in you at first... besides those silly little stories about monsters or butterfly human hybrids... make a statement, contradict it, make another statement, contradict it... haha! Anyway, this is brilliant, and I'm sure that Shymeara is VERY happy about how you ended that, seeing that was what she wanted from when Rowan first jointed the party... well, she wanted Rhen to kill him or punch him or something, but this is almost as good! Okay, I'll stop talking now.
Posted on: 2009/10/5 22:33
"Eat or be eaten, they say. Not very encouraging words. And not very acurate, either. For I discovered early in life that it is completely possible to eat a lovely, delicious meal, and then, when it's time for desert, to get eaten."
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#76|
Ah yes, Hiccup I do think that it has been better. I know I haven't posted in a looonnnnnnnngggggg time... but like I am at a point where I can end it right now... and I don't want it to end I also have the annoying problem of trying to make things intresting, funny, and other things. I will now try and attempt writing another part.
I have my next story already planned out so I wont be to sad when I have to end this one. thank you fellow people!
Posted on: 2009/10/11 18:48
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#77|
Now people... I think the dream part is best when you listen to non word music... I listened to the spiriting away soundtrack while writing his dream so maybe you should find it on youtube and listen while you read it makes it a lot better.
That night I turned in bed; Rhen had refused Rowan... she said that it was because she wasn’t going to be stuck as queen... Was that really why? The display of the earlier had been gross; Pirate John had thrown up noodles. Everyone thought it was because he was allergic... was that really why? Or had the earlier seen of Rowan made him sick... Rowan makes ME sick... so why not Pirate John?
I turned in bed again, thoughts not stopping in my head. If I could only get to sleep! It was three in the morning and I couldn’t keep my eyes shut for more than twenty seconds! I had made my mind up. Te’ijal had never eaten a human, and that was final, nothing could change my mind about that... nothing that is except for Te’ijal.
Though I don’t think that Te’ijal would ever admit to or speak about such a thing. I turned again. Rowan... what a stuck-up and princely name... would he come after us, and demand Rhen to come away to the castle with him? If he did he would have a fight... and unless he had an army with him it would only last a second... if he DID have an army it would last...
Te’ijal eats those... and Galahad stabs.... Rhen takes this half with moi... Ha! It would last one minute ten second and three fifths of a millisecond! Genius! Brilliant! Give myself a pat on the shoulder.
I then fell to the control of the dreamers. I was in the sky no wings or other contraption held me up, I was just THERE. Rhen was below and lifted up her hands and I soared down to her, I took her hand and lifted her up with me. We soared high above everything and laughed.
“Faster! Faster!” Rhen cried. I shot upward and we past a cloud, avoiding getting soaked. Then I shot downward straight to the water below. Rhen put out a finger to trail through the water as I flew inches above it. The fireflies came and surrounded us the only real light in the almost night. I took her other hand and we spun around and around, a firefly landed on her cheek and told her something, she laughed. The whole thing was beautiful, us spinning above the water, the fireflies and the reflection of light in Rhen’s eyes.
I then flew her home as dawn was approaching. She landed lightly on the grass in on the hilltop where I had first seen her and lifted her up with me. I soared back upward until Rhen’s waving figure was distant, a final glance and wave then I shot up through the sky.
Posted on: 2009/10/12 15:48
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#78|
no no hiccup I wanted her to chop his head off after refusing to marry rowan. or something elegant like that! well at least PART of my wish came true!!! xD
Posted on: 2009/10/12 18:35
Let out your feelings through music.
Turn the emotion into a song.
Be spontaneous and be yourself.
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#79|
hehe! He is in the story later so I couldn't kill him... I wish I could have... I mean Its not just everyone else who doesn't like the guy!
Posted on: 2009/10/12 19:06
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#80|
“One two three! Git zee move on Mad Marge!” The little squirrel yelled.
Mad Marge pulled in another basket of mini helmets. The squirrels marched around and around the field not stopping for hours. Mad Marge had been accepted into the squirrel’s army for one reason, and one pay. They thought it would be less work to have a giant working for them, and they would only have to pay it corn. Corn was something they had far too much of so they didn’t have any worries of having to let Mad Marge go.
The commander sat on a stump and started to count. The only problem with it, Mad Marge, was that she couldn’t count to save her life. Though he had always hated math he couldn’t give the important job of counting to any of the lesser squirrels. “One zundred two... one zundred three...” This was going to take days! The commander scowled, this was a dull job.
A fly landed on his nose and he sneezed, making the fly disappear, probably half way to the other end of the earth by now the moody little squirrel thought and went back to counting. Drat! That human had dropped a bag of explosives on her foot! Stupid girl!
“Be careful! ZYou’ll blow zus all zin to a zhousand roasted pieces!” He shouted and the girl quickly picked the bag back up. “Lazy humaz” The squirrel muttered and went back to counting.
Why had she left her friends...? Left them for this? She should have at least stayed until the end, now she would never feel fulfilled, never finished. Not that she had ever finished much... someday she would see her brother, and would he be scared of her friends! Ha! But if her friends wouldn’t come... then it wouldn’t work!
“CRAP!” Mad Marge shouted as she dropped yet another heavy basket of helmets on her foot.
“Now, now Mad Marge zlets not wake up zee whole entzire woods...” The commander said as he came to count the helmets that had just been dropped on her rather sore foot.
“One zhousand two... one zhousand tree...” The captain went on. Mad Marge rolled her eyes, they were ridicules about having enough helmets for each and every squirrel. Not that it mattered, and not that anyone cared but her foot would probably be purple for the next week. She groaned and went back to work.
Posted on: 2009/10/14 16:47
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#81|
The dream of earlier had been so real like, yet I knew it couldn’t be true, how could it? I wish it had been, but.... flying? Geez, I got all the hard things in life, like saving the world. Not that it mattered; I couldn’t have just a normal life... In a way I was grateful... life being normal wasn’t a life I wanted, no, facing death wherever you went was my life, the life I liked.
Though somehow the pain I went through didn’t seam to bother me, If were to die in battle that was the way I wanted it. I didn’t want to die in my sleep, or some other way like that, that held no story.
I stood on a hilltop below me miles and miles of land, soon to be covered with bodies alive and dead. It was sunset, so golden light was all around me; a slight wind blew my cloak as I stood there watching, waiting. Rhen came up from behind, crossing her arms and leaning against me.
“Soon this will all be gone.” She said I looked down at her.
“I know.” I told her and looked back out at the land. They were going to destroy it, if only they could see what they were destroying. There war over a single human, which had taken their things. Couldn’t they just deal with it? Like the rest of the world was? Now you could see smoke from far off camps, Thais, Sedona and some other kingdoms were joining for the final and fatal fight.
Hundreds of them going to die for a dumb war, a war they knew they would die at, and a war they knew they would loose. All because of that one mortal, the mortal that had caused me so much pain, and suffering. Rhen and I sat down at the cliff edge our feet dangling off, watching the sun set on a doomed world.
Rhen rested her head on my shoulder, a single tear falling down her cheek. I could feel her sadness through my locket, she knew about the doomed humans and elves and any other creatures about to die. I truly wish she didn’t have to know, I wished she wasn’t the one in the middle of the battle trying to kill the one who started it. The one she had once loved so dearly, now she had to destroy him.
The others knew it too; they knew that we probably wouldn’t live through it. It was awful, and I wish my friends didn’t have to go through it. I wished that we were all safe looking of the edge of this cliff, with no battle about to take place. If they destroyed it now, then the humans left would live in a dust covered earth. The air not clean to breathe, the earth hard and cracked, the water dirty and not fit to drink, living that way their whole short lives.
The sun went down I gave Rhen a quick hug and stood up, I held out my hand I she took it, and hauled her upward. I put my arm around her shoulder and we walked back down the hill, seeing a shooting star on the way. The party was waiting for us at the bottom, Galahad, Te’ijal, Elini and Pirate John; I realized how our group had shrunk. With out those two people it seamed so small. Elini winked at me and when she passed me whispered in to my ear “You two are perfect.” Well she would say a thing like that wouldn’t she?
I rolled my eyes and walked on holding Rhen’s hand we reached our camp and I bid everyone goodnight, I ducked into my tent and there it was, my staff. The staff that hopefully one day kill Dameon... The staff that almost was lost then turned so powerful. I wondered what I was now... Dark. I was dark, and yet light at the same time, the dark and light as one.
“Locket?” I asked out loud, I hoped my locket could hear me.
“Yes?” It startled me and I gave a tiny jump.
“Would you send a message to the light?” I asked I felt it fill with warmth; it liked it when I said ‘light’.
“Tell Rhen, ‘Goodnight’. Ok?” I told it, it got even warmer.
“She says ‘night Lars’.” I may have just been dreaming, but I thought I heard it chuckle. “Night Lars.”
Posted on: 2009/10/15 0:13
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#82|
I know my posts have been shorter... but my sister is calling me to go watch a movie... Life has its annoying demands and I MUST go watch the movie... So you all can read this while you waite... and While I watch a movie!
That morning I woke up to hear... wait a minute there were no sounds. You couldn’t hear a thing, I opened the door to my tent there were leaves covering the ground, and so much time had passed. We had gone in almost a full year; we had started in the beginning of winter I thought... Now it would be almost time for the children all over the world to dress up and get candy.
The strange thing was that I was the only one up, the only one outside... Strange... If they could only see this... all these leaves, autumn once more, it had been autumn last time we saved the world... Now we were at it again... It couldn’t be saved for one minute could it?
I cleared a little bit of leaves away and placed some wood on the ground, today I would make breakfast for my friends. They disserved a good last breakfast, they would probably die soon... My mind drifted off onto one of its wild rampages. Not that it mattered; other people could save the world when we were dead. The Oracle could find some other poor soul to do all the work...
I walked over to a tree with eggs in a nest.
“Ok, now the hard task of climbing the tree...”
“You can do it Lars, if you can save the world you can climb a tree...”
“But what if I fall...”
“Then you’ll be fine, it’s only a tree Lars go on start climbing!”
“Fine!” I locket could be so annoying!
I grabbed the first branch and pulled myself up, there was the nest!
“See! You did it!” The locket said.
“Whatever!” I scowled and reached for the eggs.
“Lars? What are you doing?” Rhen said looking up at my from under the branch.
“Nothing! Nothing, nothing at all!” I said but my hand came away with nothing.
“EEEEEEKKKKKK!” I screamed as I fell from the branch. I landed hard on the ground and leaves flew around me and finally settled. I winced and opened my eyes. Rhen was leaning over me, laughing.
“Lars!” she managed to say through giggles.
“Locket! I thought you said I wouldn’t fall!” I said through gritted teeth.
“I said no such thing!” The locket said and I could just imagine it crossing its arms.
“Yes it said no such thing!” Rhen’s locket said, Rhen then started a new fit of giggles.
“Oh shut up!” I said rolling my eyes, Rhen finally got over her laughter and held out a hand to pull me up. I raised my eyebrow. She dares to help up the clever Lars... well she was asking for it. I grabbed her hand and yanked, she gave a surprised squeak and fell onto the ground.
I jumped up and started running, had to get a head start, after all Rhen was faster than me. She hopped up, leaves sticking in her hair she started after me. I hid behind the tree, peaking around it, that was odd I didn’t see Rhen.
“ACK!” I screeched as Rhen pushed me to the ground from behind me. Now I was back on my back and Rhen came and SAT on me! She is so heavy! She rested her elbows on my collarbone and stared down at me.
“You shouldn’t run Lars, we both know that I’m faster...” She leaned down and gave me a quick little kiss on the cheek and then got up. I was sure I was blushing; again I say pink doesn’t look good on skin.
Posted on: 2009/10/15 22:11
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#83|
When I got back Elini was already making breakfast, when I entered our clearing she looked up. What really annoyed me was that she winked at me then nodded towards Rhen, who was helping Te’ijal decide which outfit would be best to wear in the final battle. So I was left to help Elini with making breakfast... so she could bother me about things.
“Lars! Come help make breakfast.” She waved me over and I groaned, rolling my eyes and making sure Elini saw me do it. I walked over and started to cook the eggs.
“So Lars, where were you?” Elini asked.
“I was trying to make you all breakfast, but I fell out of a tree getting the eggs.” I scowled at her and went back to cooking. Not that I didn’t like cooking, because I did, and was good at it, just I didn’t want Elini to get on one of her heart lectures.
“Oh my, why didn’t you just use magic?” She didn’t look concerned at all. I knew she was just getting me ready for my lecture.
“I am trying to save my mana.” I shrugged and went back to placing French toast in the pan.
“Ah ha, well Lars I’ve been meaning to give you this talk for a long time.” She looked very pleased, I groaned and let my head fall in my hand.
“Lars, you really love Rhen, don’t you?” I looked up at Elini; she was the oddest human I had ever met, giving people lectures about other people. Yuck.
“So? What if I do?” I asked, stubbornness in my voice. She rolled her eyes.
“Look Lars, the world is coming to an end, and we all are probably going to die. Aren’t you even going to tell her?” She got up and went to go get the plates. I rolled what she had said around in my mind. It hadn’t been so bad, the lecture... actually it hadn’t really been a lecture, to which I was thankful.
Everyone was talking while they ate their breakfast, all except me, I was still thinking about what Elini had said. I was distracted as I packed up my things, I didn’t even notice as Rhen came up behind me.
“Lars?” She tapped my back.
“Akkk!” I screeched and fell on my face. “Ouch...” I groaned as I rolled over.
“I’m sorry.” She said pulling me back on my feet. I gave her a smile.
“Its ok. Hey would you tell the others I’m going into town? Just for a while, I’ll be right back.” I told her and grabbed my backpack.
“Ok!” She said and skipped off to tell the others.
I came back an hour later, and everyone was ready, Te’ijal and Rhen had gone to see if the battle had started they came running back.
“Its terrible!” Rhen said, her cheeks flushed and she tried to catch her breath, her and Te’ijal had just run two miles. Rhen fell to her knees, and I walked over to her and sat next to her.
“You ok?” I asked handing her water in a glass. She looked at me surprised. “It turns out my staff also can provide drinks.” I told her and she smiled, taking the glass from me, she then chugged the whole thing.
We then started on our journey; on the cliff the day before I had sat on with Rhen was not the beautiful sight it had been before. Now smoke and magic was all that could be seen in the field below, and blood, you could see blood. The battle we were about to join, and about to die in.
“Ready everyone?” Rhen asked, it made me even sadder, seeing her ready to throw herself into the mess, and die for everyone else, the people she didn’t even know. I walked up and joined her at the top of the hill; she looked up at me and smiled, making my heart snap. It was just so difficult to let her go into the battle field she had almost a full life time to spend, and she was choosing to throw it away.
“We don’t have to do it you know.” I whispered, she remained looking up at me.
“I have to, you and the others don’t but, this I must do, and I will destroy Dameon, as the last thing I do.” She looked down at her feet. “I must finish what they started.” She looked back up, searching my eyes. It broke my heart again to hear her say, ‘as’ the last thing she would do, not even ‘If’ it was the last thing she did.
“I know, I wouldn’t miss it for the world.” I said linking my arm around hers, and smiled down at her, she smiled back up at me, which again made my heart rip in two, again.
“Lets go” Te’ijal and Galahad stepped up behind us, fallowed by Elini and pirate John. I tapped my locket and staff each once and then we all jumped, off the cliff. Down we fell, and I knew they were all depending on me to make sure they had a safe landing.
We landed and the action began.
Posted on: 2009/10/16 20:40
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#84|
Posted on: 2009/10/16 20:57
"Eat or be eaten, they say. Not very encouraging words. And not very acurate, either. For I discovered early in life that it is completely possible to eat a lovely, delicious meal, and then, when it's time for desert, to get eaten."
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#85|
Thanks everyone for reading!
The next part will be lame... I can write sticky, sad, or other things just not battles... So it most likly will be mainly the thoughts of random people... until the final battle with erg... Dameon. And that WONT be the end
Posted on: 2009/10/18 14:43
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#86|
Sorry its short... but Hiccup is calling me to watch a movie!
Rhen unlinked her arm from mine and stepped forward, I had a shield around all of us, making it so we couldn’t hear or see the others, the ones outside of the shield. We could only see red sparkly dust outside swirling around. Rhen waved and placed her hand through the shield, and stepped out.
“Wait!” Te’ijal shouted but I let down the shield to chase after Rhen, and the sounds were to loud for Te’ijal to be heard. I saw a flash of blue/purple hair and ran towards it, I felt a blow to my back and snapped around. There was a vampire, smiling down evilly.
“Shouldn’t you be at home? Studying for school?” It said, and I was surprised I could hear it, but as I looked around everything seamed to go around with out sound. Everything fighting around us like there was a round wall around the vampire and I. The vampire held out a golden chain, with a medallion on it.
“Lisssten to what I ssssay...” he said circling me, and stopping right in front of me. He held up the necklace, and started slowly swinging it back and fourth... back and fourth...
“Now... you are to kill your friends and yourssself....” The vampire looked at my now stone still face.
“Nod your head yessss....” It said, I was about to move my head when someone stabbed the vampire from behind and he fell to the ground, leaving Rhen standing there her sword still stuck in the vampires back. She kept it there, just staring at me, as the vampire started to turn to ash.
She didn’t move, and neither did I, stuck there as if frozen.
Posted on: 2009/10/18 17:22
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#87|
eesh I know its short... but I have to go to bed... so be happy! I left you at a cliff hanger! muahahaha!
Rhen didn’t move, neither did I just stood there not moving, not even seaming to breath, my eyes did not move or blink. Rhen just stood there as if stone, her sword stuck on a bloody mass of ashes. I saw a figure of Te’ijal running towards the shield, which drowned us off from the battle. I tried to tell her somehow to stop, but couldn’t move, or speak.
Te’ijal’s ran into the shield and froze, in a running position, her arms and face scratched and one of her legs crusted in blood. Then Galahad turned around, and saw Te’ijal just standing there, and came running. He to was frozen, his arms reached out about to grab Te’ijal, his mouth formed as if her were shouting Te’ijal’s name.
I then felt warmth and then a voice calling me.
“Lars....” It was very distant, and I didn’t know if it was just me or something else. It came again, not any closer, so far away.
“Lars...” I could see Rhen’s locket glowing and knew it was her, but her voice faded away as my attention was drawn to Elini and Pirate John, running towards us. I wanted to scream stop, but my mouth wouldn’t move, I tried and tried again, but it wouldn’t budge.
Elini and Pirate John ran in and also froze, Elini standing there staring at us all like we were the strangest things she’d ever seen. And Pirate John, his eyes gently shut, as he had blinked when the freezing had activated, reaching out for Elini’s arm. We were all there, and I had my orders, to kill each and every one of them.
I was released from my frozenness, and my eyes turned red as I started to turn pale, like a vampire with no fangs. My fallen staff started to come towards me, floating to my outstretched hand. I could hear Rhen scream through my locket.
“LARSSSSS!” She screamed, still not able to move, watching me turn into a... something evil. But it wasn’t me!!! The vampire had put a spell on me!
“I... Can’t. Stop. I. Have. To. Do. It.” I said through the locket the staff fell into and my hand grasped around it. I looked around, the others frozen, and I had no control over myself.
“Yes you can! Remember! Only we can destroy the world, only we can save it! Don’t destroy the connection of light and dark Lars! I need you Lars!!! Don’t do this!” Rhen...
“Rhen! I remember!” Then all went dark.
Posted on: 2009/10/19 0:12
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#88|
Tell me if this is to weird and I’ll change it, though I like it
I opened my eyes, and winced as blood trickled into my mouth. Everything was blurry, but I could tell that I was no longer in the grassy battlefield. I heard someone whisper they wouldn’t stop calling my name, all I wanted right now was to be dead, I hurt all over like my skin was shrinking and I was shriveling up into ashes.
“Llaarrss...” The someone called my name again, but all I could do was moan. Someone moved me from Rhen’s lap to a wall, I pressed myself against the cave the refreshing coolness creeping through me, like it was taking over my body. I groaned again as someone brushed some of my green hair from my wound, and a new stream of blood poured into my mouth.
I turned around and spat, blood spraying onto the cave wall. I slowly opened my eyes again, instantly regretting it, as pain shot through me. Memories flooded back to me, Rhen waving before walking out of my shield into battle. Rhen stabbing the vampire, and freezing as the vampire turned to ash.
Rhen screaming as I held my staff ready to kill them all, then everything going black, as I remembered, then I was here feeling terrible pain and bleeding.
“Lars! Your color is coming back!” I heard Rhen say, though it was muffled and distant, everything anyone said didn’t sound right, so distant and far away. I looked down at my hands, they were white and... Not normal.
“You think you can fight?” Te’ijal asked as she pressed a bottle of water into my hands.
“Yeah... and I’m sorry...” I said my voice cracked and odd sounding.
“Lars... You attacked yourself; you were about to kill yourself, you were down on the ground with a sword about to stab your heart, then you said ‘I will destroy myself so I wont destroy my friends.’ And moved to plunge it through your heart, Rhen suddenly broke free of the spell and ran to stop you.” Elini explained. “Love set Rhen free.”
Rhen walked over to where I was, pressed against a corner in the cave. She sat next to me and I turned my face to her “I love you Rhen.” I whispered. She looked me in the eye and said “I love you to Lars.”
I blinked several times keeping blood from entering my eye “Footsteps... coming closer.” I managed to say.
“Ah... so now you know, Lars is more than you thought...” Dameon said stepping out from a cave passage. “How touching, you all here and Lars is hurt... I see you met my vampire friend, I also see that you failed Lars.” Dameon shook his head. I looked back down at my now slightly paler than ‘normal’ colored hands, it was true, I had fooled them all, I wasn’t who I had said, no I was more.
"what?" Elini asked.
I gulped and slowly reached up and pulled the hair away from my slightly pointed ear.
“See, a halfling, not human, yet not completely elven. He tricked all of you into thinking he was completely human in every way.” Dameon said as he stepped further into the cave. Rhen stared at Dameon, an evil glint coming to her eye.
“Dameon, it doesn’t matter to me if Lars isn’t all that he seams. Though you are going to wish you had never seen any of us, I’m going to kill you.” She said, the anger in her voice the must beautiful thing if only Dameon could hear the beauty in it.
“Rhen, as I said we will rule the world!” Dameon said coming further into the light.
“No Dameon, as I said, I am going to kill you. You never will rule the world, no longer shall you harm Lars, no longer shall you torture Lars’s mind. Set him free!” Rhen said, her voice still menacing.
“Ha, have it your way then... Jay, you take the looser Lars, Vampires you get Te’ijal and Galahad, Jay’s team takes Pirate John, and... Ni and Fell you get Elini. To my horror, Jay stepped out from the corridor that Dameon had just come from, smiling like it was her Birthday and she got to kill me on it... which was exactly what was happening.
Rhen looked back at me with that smile that could break only my heart she said words that I could barely make out “Mem’ry I’ Te lon Far’mont” words she knew I would only be able to understand, for she had said it in the words of the elves. They meant ‘Always remember; only we can destroy it.
Which brought back so many forgotten memories. Sitting by a little stream, sunlight dancing around on the water. My tears falling into it, because the other elven children wouldn’t speak to me, always ignoring me, then my heart hardening against anyone that wasn’t myself. And then I set off, only at the age of eight, to be in the human lands. Where they wouldn’t care if I wasn’t all the way human, and wouldn’t ever notice my slightly pointed ears.
I could be normal, and so I jumped of the cliff, and fell to the human world, landing in Ghalarah and some mysterious cloaked figure picking me up from the blood stained snow, and taking my to the steps of my old house. Then giving my last words of magic “Fay’lear” meaning ‘love’ then she disappeared never to be seen again. My mind was brought back to the present by a voice, the voice of the one I was to kill.
“So Lars, we meet again.”
Posted on: 2009/10/19 18:08
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#89|
Ok people... I am to weirded out by Lars being a halfling (elf/human) So... as soon as I can I am going to change it!
conversation with self:
"See, Avey's going to change it, you'll be fine, its ok just calm down..."
"NO! NO! No! EEEKKK! Its terrible!!!" *tears run down face*
"Now, now, Avey you'll be fine..."
"No I wont! I have to get it right! Now shut up voice!"
"But... I just..." Avey places hand over little voices mouth in her mind
"No, zip, none, now quiet I have to rewrite this."
"ARG! How can I think with you talking!"
Someone walks into the room.
"Avey? Are you ok?" The elf askes.
"AHhhhhhhhhhh! an elf! there fallowing me! EEEEKKK! Go away!" By now Avey is in a ball on the ground.
"See, if you had just have listned to me..." The voice went on.
"Oh shut up." Avey says and goes back to writing.
Posted on: 2009/10/19 18:42
|Re: Ending a Black Heart (RxL)||#90|
MUAHAHAHA! AVEY HAS AN IDEA! SO SHE DOESN'T HAVE TO REWRITE ALL THAT! SO PEOPLE WHO WERE WEIRDED OUT BY THAT ITS OK! LARS ISN'T REALLY... OH RIGHT CAN'T TELL YOU GUYS! JUST READ THE PART ABOUT THE MYSTERIOUS PERSON AGAIN AND THINK OF WHAT AVEY COULD DO THAT WOULD MAKE IT SO LARS ISN'T AND ELF/HUMAN ANYMORE.. K?
Posted on: 2009/10/19 19:14
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