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Part 34 The dream of earlier had been so real like, yet I knew it couldn’t be true, how could it? I wish it had been, but.... flying? Geez, I got all the hard things in life, like saving the world. Not that it mattered; I couldn’t have just a normal life... In a way I was grateful... life being normal wasn’t a life I wanted, no, facing death wherever you went was my life, the life I liked. Though somehow the pain I went through didn’t seam to bother me, If were to die in battle that was the way I wanted it. I didn’t want to die in my sleep, or some other way like that, that held no story. I stood on a hilltop below me miles and miles of land, soon to be covered with bodies alive and dead. It was sunset, so golden light was all around me; a slight wind blew my cloak as I stood there watching, waiting. Rhen came up from behind, crossing her arms and leaning against me. “Soon this will all be gone.” She said I looked down at her. “I know.” I told her and looked back out at the land. They were going to destroy it, if only they could see what they were destroying. There war over a single human, which had taken their things. Couldn’t they just deal with it? Like the rest of the world was? Now you could see smoke from far off camps, Thais, Sedona and some other kingdoms were joining for the final and fatal fight. Hundreds of them going to die for a dumb war, a war they knew they would die at, and a war they knew they would loose. All because of that one mortal, the mortal that had caused me so much pain, and suffering. Rhen and I sat down at the cliff edge our feet dangling off, watching the sun set on a doomed world. Rhen rested her head on my shoulder, a single tear falling down her cheek. I could feel her sadness through my locket, she knew about the doomed humans and elves and any other creatures about to die. I truly wish she didn’t have to know, I wished she wasn’t the one in the middle of the battle trying to kill the one who started it. The one she had once loved so dearly, now she had to destroy him. The others knew it too; they knew that we probably wouldn’t live through it. It was awful, and I wish my friends didn’t have to go through it. I wished that we were all safe looking of the edge of this cliff, with no battle about to take place. If they destroyed it now, then the humans left would live in a dust covered earth. The air not clean to breathe, the earth hard and cracked, the water dirty and not fit to drink, living that way their whole short lives. The sun went down I gave Rhen a quick hug and stood up, I held out my hand I she took it, and hauled her upward. I put my arm around her shoulder and we walked back down the hill, seeing a shooting star on the way. The party was waiting for us at the bottom, Galahad, Te’ijal, Elini and Pirate John; I realized how our group had shrunk. With out those two people it seamed so small. Elini winked at me and when she passed me whispered in to my ear “You two are perfect.” Well she would say a thing like that wouldn’t she? I rolled my eyes and walked on holding Rhen’s hand we reached our camp and I bid everyone goodnight, I ducked into my tent and there it was, my staff. The staff that hopefully one day kill Dameon... The staff that almost was lost then turned so powerful. I wondered what I was now... Dark. I was dark, and yet light at the same time, the dark and light as one. “Locket?” I asked out loud, I hoped my locket could hear me. “Yes?” It startled me and I gave a tiny jump. “Would you send a message to the light?” I asked I felt it fill with warmth; it liked it when I said ‘light’. “Of course.” “Tell Rhen, ‘Goodnight’. Ok?” I told it, it got even warmer. “She says ‘night Lars’.” I may have just been dreaming, but I thought I heard it chuckle. “Night Lars.”
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I know my posts have been shorter... but my sister is calling me to go watch a movie... Life has its annoying demands and I MUST go watch the movie... So you all can read this while you waite... and While I watch a movie!
Leafly Lovely Part 35 That morning I woke up to hear... wait a minute there were no sounds. You couldn’t hear a thing, I opened the door to my tent there were leaves covering the ground, and so much time had passed. We had gone in almost a full year; we had started in the beginning of winter I thought... Now it would be almost time for the children all over the world to dress up and get candy. The strange thing was that I was the only one up, the only one outside... Strange... If they could only see this... all these leaves, autumn once more, it had been autumn last time we saved the world... Now we were at it again... It couldn’t be saved for one minute could it? I cleared a little bit of leaves away and placed some wood on the ground, today I would make breakfast for my friends. They disserved a good last breakfast, they would probably die soon... My mind drifted off onto one of its wild rampages. Not that it mattered; other people could save the world when we were dead. The Oracle could find some other poor soul to do all the work... I walked over to a tree with eggs in a nest. “Ok, now the hard task of climbing the tree...” “You can do it Lars, if you can save the world you can climb a tree...” “But what if I fall...” “Then you’ll be fine, it’s only a tree Lars go on start climbing!” “Fine!” I locket could be so annoying! I grabbed the first branch and pulled myself up, there was the nest! “See! You did it!” The locket said. “Whatever!” I scowled and reached for the eggs. “Lars? What are you doing?” Rhen said looking up at my from under the branch. “Nothing! Nothing, nothing at all!” I said but my hand came away with nothing. “EEEEEEKKKKKK!” I screamed as I fell from the branch. I landed hard on the ground and leaves flew around me and finally settled. I winced and opened my eyes. Rhen was leaning over me, laughing. “Lars!” she managed to say through giggles. “Locket! I thought you said I wouldn’t fall!” I said through gritted teeth. “I said no such thing!” The locket said and I could just imagine it crossing its arms. “Yes it said no such thing!” Rhen’s locket said, Rhen then started a new fit of giggles. “Oh shut up!” I said rolling my eyes, Rhen finally got over her laughter and held out a hand to pull me up. I raised my eyebrow. She dares to help up the clever Lars... well she was asking for it. I grabbed her hand and yanked, she gave a surprised squeak and fell onto the ground. I jumped up and started running, had to get a head start, after all Rhen was faster than me. She hopped up, leaves sticking in her hair she started after me. I hid behind the tree, peaking around it, that was odd I didn’t see Rhen. “ACK!” I screeched as Rhen pushed me to the ground from behind me. Now I was back on my back and Rhen came and SAT on me! She is so heavy! She rested her elbows on my collarbone and stared down at me. “You shouldn’t run Lars, we both know that I’m faster...” She leaned down and gave me a quick little kiss on the cheek and then got up. I was sure I was blushing; again I say pink doesn’t look good on skin.
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Part 36 When I got back Elini was already making breakfast, when I entered our clearing she looked up. What really annoyed me was that she winked at me then nodded towards Rhen, who was helping Te’ijal decide which outfit would be best to wear in the final battle. So I was left to help Elini with making breakfast... so she could bother me about things. “Lars! Come help make breakfast.” She waved me over and I groaned, rolling my eyes and making sure Elini saw me do it. I walked over and started to cook the eggs. “So Lars, where were you?” Elini asked. “I was trying to make you all breakfast, but I fell out of a tree getting the eggs.” I scowled at her and went back to cooking. Not that I didn’t like cooking, because I did, and was good at it, just I didn’t want Elini to get on one of her heart lectures. “Oh my, why didn’t you just use magic?” She didn’t look concerned at all. I knew she was just getting me ready for my lecture. “I am trying to save my mana.” I shrugged and went back to placing French toast in the pan. “Ah ha, well Lars I’ve been meaning to give you this talk for a long time.” She looked very pleased, I groaned and let my head fall in my hand. “Lars, you really love Rhen, don’t you?” I looked up at Elini; she was the oddest human I had ever met, giving people lectures about other people. Yuck. “So? What if I do?” I asked, stubbornness in my voice. She rolled her eyes. “Look Lars, the world is coming to an end, and we all are probably going to die. Aren’t you even going to tell her?” She got up and went to go get the plates. I rolled what she had said around in my mind. It hadn’t been so bad, the lecture... actually it hadn’t really been a lecture, to which I was thankful. Everyone was talking while they ate their breakfast, all except me, I was still thinking about what Elini had said. I was distracted as I packed up my things, I didn’t even notice as Rhen came up behind me. “Lars?” She tapped my back. “Akkk!” I screeched and fell on my face. “Ouch...” I groaned as I rolled over. “I’m sorry.” She said pulling me back on my feet. I gave her a smile. “Its ok. Hey would you tell the others I’m going into town? Just for a while, I’ll be right back.” I told her and grabbed my backpack. “Ok!” She said and skipped off to tell the others. I came back an hour later, and everyone was ready, Te’ijal and Rhen had gone to see if the battle had started they came running back. “Its terrible!” Rhen said, her cheeks flushed and she tried to catch her breath, her and Te’ijal had just run two miles. Rhen fell to her knees, and I walked over to her and sat next to her. “You ok?” I asked handing her water in a glass. She looked at me surprised. “It turns out my staff also can provide drinks.” I told her and she smiled, taking the glass from me, she then chugged the whole thing. We then started on our journey; on the cliff the day before I had sat on with Rhen was not the beautiful sight it had been before. Now smoke and magic was all that could be seen in the field below, and blood, you could see blood. The battle we were about to join, and about to die in. “Ready everyone?” Rhen asked, it made me even sadder, seeing her ready to throw herself into the mess, and die for everyone else, the people she didn’t even know. I walked up and joined her at the top of the hill; she looked up at me and smiled, making my heart snap. It was just so difficult to let her go into the battle field she had almost a full life time to spend, and she was choosing to throw it away. “We don’t have to do it you know.” I whispered, she remained looking up at me. “I have to, you and the others don’t but, this I must do, and I will destroy Dameon, as the last thing I do.” She looked down at her feet. “I must finish what they started.” She looked back up, searching my eyes. It broke my heart again to hear her say, ‘as’ the last thing she would do, not even ‘If’ it was the last thing she did. “I know, I wouldn’t miss it for the world.” I said linking my arm around hers, and smiled down at her, she smiled back up at me, which again made my heart rip in two, again. “Lets go” Te’ijal and Galahad stepped up behind us, fallowed by Elini and pirate John. I tapped my locket and staff each once and then we all jumped, off the cliff. Down we fell, and I knew they were all depending on me to make sure they had a safe landing. We landed and the action began.
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Lovely
Posted on: 2009/10/16 20:57
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Thanks everyone for reading!
The next part will be lame... I can write sticky, sad, or other things just not battles... So it most likly will be mainly the thoughts of random people... until the final battle with erg... Dameon. And that WONT be the end ![]()
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Sorry its short... but Hiccup is calling me to watch a movie!
Vampire spell Part 37 Rhen unlinked her arm from mine and stepped forward, I had a shield around all of us, making it so we couldn’t hear or see the others, the ones outside of the shield. We could only see red sparkly dust outside swirling around. Rhen waved and placed her hand through the shield, and stepped out. “Wait!” Te’ijal shouted but I let down the shield to chase after Rhen, and the sounds were to loud for Te’ijal to be heard. I saw a flash of blue/purple hair and ran towards it, I felt a blow to my back and snapped around. There was a vampire, smiling down evilly. “Shouldn’t you be at home? Studying for school?” It said, and I was surprised I could hear it, but as I looked around everything seamed to go around with out sound. Everything fighting around us like there was a round wall around the vampire and I. The vampire held out a golden chain, with a medallion on it. “Lisssten to what I ssssay...” he said circling me, and stopping right in front of me. He held up the necklace, and started slowly swinging it back and fourth... back and fourth... “Now... you are to kill your friends and yourssself....” The vampire looked at my now stone still face. “Nod your head yessss....” It said, I was about to move my head when someone stabbed the vampire from behind and he fell to the ground, leaving Rhen standing there her sword still stuck in the vampires back. She kept it there, just staring at me, as the vampire started to turn to ash. She didn’t move, and neither did I, stuck there as if frozen.
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eesh I know its short... but I have to go to bed... so be happy! I left you at a cliff hanger! muahahaha!
broken spell Part 38 Rhen didn’t move, neither did I just stood there not moving, not even seaming to breath, my eyes did not move or blink. Rhen just stood there as if stone, her sword stuck on a bloody mass of ashes. I saw a figure of Te’ijal running towards the shield, which drowned us off from the battle. I tried to tell her somehow to stop, but couldn’t move, or speak. Te’ijal’s ran into the shield and froze, in a running position, her arms and face scratched and one of her legs crusted in blood. Then Galahad turned around, and saw Te’ijal just standing there, and came running. He to was frozen, his arms reached out about to grab Te’ijal, his mouth formed as if her were shouting Te’ijal’s name. I then felt warmth and then a voice calling me. “Lars....” It was very distant, and I didn’t know if it was just me or something else. It came again, not any closer, so far away. “Lars...” I could see Rhen’s locket glowing and knew it was her, but her voice faded away as my attention was drawn to Elini and Pirate John, running towards us. I wanted to scream stop, but my mouth wouldn’t move, I tried and tried again, but it wouldn’t budge. Elini and Pirate John ran in and also froze, Elini standing there staring at us all like we were the strangest things she’d ever seen. And Pirate John, his eyes gently shut, as he had blinked when the freezing had activated, reaching out for Elini’s arm. We were all there, and I had my orders, to kill each and every one of them. I was released from my frozenness, and my eyes turned red as I started to turn pale, like a vampire with no fangs. My fallen staff started to come towards me, floating to my outstretched hand. I could hear Rhen scream through my locket. “LARSSSSS!” She screamed, still not able to move, watching me turn into a... something evil. But it wasn’t me!!! The vampire had put a spell on me! “I... Can’t. Stop. I. Have. To. Do. It.” I said through the locket the staff fell into and my hand grasped around it. I looked around, the others frozen, and I had no control over myself. “Yes you can! Remember! Only we can destroy the world, only we can save it! Don’t destroy the connection of light and dark Lars! I need you Lars!!! Don’t do this!” Rhen... “Rhen! I remember!” Then all went dark.
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Tell me if this is to weird and I’ll change it, though I like it
The unknown Part 39 I opened my eyes, and winced as blood trickled into my mouth. Everything was blurry, but I could tell that I was no longer in the grassy battlefield. I heard someone whisper they wouldn’t stop calling my name, all I wanted right now was to be dead, I hurt all over like my skin was shrinking and I was shriveling up into ashes. “Llaarrss...” The someone called my name again, but all I could do was moan. Someone moved me from Rhen’s lap to a wall, I pressed myself against the cave the refreshing coolness creeping through me, like it was taking over my body. I groaned again as someone brushed some of my green hair from my wound, and a new stream of blood poured into my mouth. I turned around and spat, blood spraying onto the cave wall. I slowly opened my eyes again, instantly regretting it, as pain shot through me. Memories flooded back to me, Rhen waving before walking out of my shield into battle. Rhen stabbing the vampire, and freezing as the vampire turned to ash. Rhen screaming as I held my staff ready to kill them all, then everything going black, as I remembered, then I was here feeling terrible pain and bleeding. “Lars! Your color is coming back!” I heard Rhen say, though it was muffled and distant, everything anyone said didn’t sound right, so distant and far away. I looked down at my hands, they were white and... Not normal. “You think you can fight?” Te’ijal asked as she pressed a bottle of water into my hands. “Yeah... and I’m sorry...” I said my voice cracked and odd sounding. “Lars... You attacked yourself; you were about to kill yourself, you were down on the ground with a sword about to stab your heart, then you said ‘I will destroy myself so I wont destroy my friends.’ And moved to plunge it through your heart, Rhen suddenly broke free of the spell and ran to stop you.” Elini explained. “Love set Rhen free.” Rhen walked over to where I was, pressed against a corner in the cave. She sat next to me and I turned my face to her “I love you Rhen.” I whispered. She looked me in the eye and said “I love you to Lars.” I blinked several times keeping blood from entering my eye “Footsteps... coming closer.” I managed to say. “Ah... so now you know, Lars is more than you thought...” Dameon said stepping out from a cave passage. “How touching, you all here and Lars is hurt... I see you met my vampire friend, I also see that you failed Lars.” Dameon shook his head. I looked back down at my now slightly paler than ‘normal’ colored hands, it was true, I had fooled them all, I wasn’t who I had said, no I was more. "what?" Elini asked. I gulped and slowly reached up and pulled the hair away from my slightly pointed ear. “See, a halfling, not human, yet not completely elven. He tricked all of you into thinking he was completely human in every way.” Dameon said as he stepped further into the cave. Rhen stared at Dameon, an evil glint coming to her eye. “Dameon, it doesn’t matter to me if Lars isn’t all that he seams. Though you are going to wish you had never seen any of us, I’m going to kill you.” She said, the anger in her voice the must beautiful thing if only Dameon could hear the beauty in it. “Rhen, as I said we will rule the world!” Dameon said coming further into the light. “No Dameon, as I said, I am going to kill you. You never will rule the world, no longer shall you harm Lars, no longer shall you torture Lars’s mind. Set him free!” Rhen said, her voice still menacing. “Ha, have it your way then... Jay, you take the looser Lars, Vampires you get Te’ijal and Galahad, Jay’s team takes Pirate John, and... Ni and Fell you get Elini. To my horror, Jay stepped out from the corridor that Dameon had just come from, smiling like it was her Birthday and she got to kill me on it... which was exactly what was happening. Rhen looked back at me with that smile that could break only my heart she said words that I could barely make out “Mem’ry I’ Te lon Far’mont” words she knew I would only be able to understand, for she had said it in the words of the elves. They meant ‘Always remember; only we can destroy it. Which brought back so many forgotten memories. Sitting by a little stream, sunlight dancing around on the water. My tears falling into it, because the other elven children wouldn’t speak to me, always ignoring me, then my heart hardening against anyone that wasn’t myself. And then I set off, only at the age of eight, to be in the human lands. Where they wouldn’t care if I wasn’t all the way human, and wouldn’t ever notice my slightly pointed ears. I could be normal, and so I jumped of the cliff, and fell to the human world, landing in Ghalarah and some mysterious cloaked figure picking me up from the blood stained snow, and taking my to the steps of my old house. Then giving my last words of magic “Fay’lear” meaning ‘love’ then she disappeared never to be seen again. My mind was brought back to the present by a voice, the voice of the one I was to kill. “So Lars, we meet again.”
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Ok people... I am to weirded out by Lars being a halfling (elf/human) So... as soon as I can I am going to change it!
conversation with self: "See, Avey's going to change it, you'll be fine, its ok just calm down..." "NO! NO! No! EEEKKK! Its terrible!!!" *tears run down face* "Now, now, Avey you'll be fine..." "No I wont! I have to get it right! Now shut up voice!" "But... I just..." Avey places hand over little voices mouth in her mind "No, zip, none, now quiet I have to rewrite this." "But..." "ARG! How can I think with you talking!" Someone walks into the room. "Avey? Are you ok?" The elf askes. "AHhhhhhhhhhh! an elf! there fallowing me! EEEEKKK! Go away!" By now Avey is in a ball on the ground. "See, if you had just have listned to me..." The voice went on. "Oh shut up." Avey says and goes back to writing.
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MUAHAHAHA! AVEY HAS AN IDEA! SO SHE DOESN'T HAVE TO REWRITE ALL THAT! SO PEOPLE WHO WERE WEIRDED OUT BY THAT ITS OK! LARS ISN'T REALLY... OH RIGHT CAN'T TELL YOU GUYS! JUST READ THE PART ABOUT THE MYSTERIOUS PERSON AGAIN AND THINK OF WHAT AVEY COULD DO THAT WOULD MAKE IT SO LARS ISN'T AND ELF/HUMAN ANYMORE.. K?
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bahaha did I scare ya avey?
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erm... no. But hi Shymaera! you need to come over again soon, that was sooo much fun!!! and did you read the last one?
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Muahahaha!
Part 40 I rolled my eyes, sure I was in pain but letting Jay see that would be like me eating mud. “I hope this is the last time I’ll have to kill you.” I said it hurt to get up, I winced it was pretty painful. Jay shrugged and smiled an evil smile that I remembered so well. Once right before she snuck into a house, another time it was at a birthday party and she had put a bug in a piece of birthday cake... she ended up getting the piece of cake and ate the bug, except I was the only one who knew she had. I chuckled at the thought of it. “My orders are to finish you, though it would have been so much fun to see you kill your friends, then yourself, so why didn’t it work? Did you use some sort of magic shield?” Jay asked it was to bad she could never have lived a normal life. “My love for my friends was to great, I tried to kill myself so I wouldn’t kill them.” I tapped my staff and locket; I didn’t know why I did that before a battle, just habit I guess. “You would give your own life for scum? Ha! People like that are worth nothing, there weak and can’t save them selves when in battle.” She pulled out a dagger, it was shiny and I wondered if she polished them. “So what about you, I killed you, why are you alive?” I asked. It really had shocked me to see her alive once more. “Oh, I have ways...” She examined her dagger. “You see this dagger here? I call it black blood, it turns into blood before it hits your arm then it eats the top layer of skin where it hit, isn’t that cool? I gave each one of my daggers names and they each do different things.” She tossed it in the air and grabbed it by the handle right before it hit her. I stared off as an image of a memory cleared my vision. It was in a meadow at night, when I was human, living in the human world. There was a lady with black clothing and black eyes and black hair, yet somewhat pale skin and pointed ears, a true elf. She nelt down in front of my seven-year-old figure and asked me my name, I remember telling her a fake name, a lie. Then she had stood up and started saying silvery elven words while touching my hand; I tried to pull away but was stuck. “Cursed be you child whose words are not true, human who stands in the rain and night through. Memory gone when I leave stuck as a halfling like an ink spot on a page. Only one thing can break this spell, the one thing that no one knows, not until, two worlds end, will the spell break. Awaken as the world calls your name.” Then she disappeared and I was be-spelled r cursed or whatever you call it. But my worries had lessened now I knew I was really human, and just under a spell, a spell that I somehow could break. The memory ended, oh great back to the present. Jay threw the dagger at my arm, and it turned into actual black blood just as it hit my arm and it ate through my first layer of skin where it had hit, just as she had said it would. I screeched in pain, it felt like I hade just had someone rip the skin from my arm, in a way it had. “I don’t get it, what is wrong with you?” Jay asked, I hadn’t moved to dodge her dagger, yet she didn’t know that I had been in deep thought. I looked past where Jay had me somewhat cornered to where Rhen was fighting Dameon. To my surprise Dameon wasn’t dead yet, and Rhen wasn’t winning. In fact Dameon almost had Rhen cornered, and there was no one else to help Rhen. They all were having their own struggles with others. I turned back to Jay, “ I don’t have time for this.” I had to help Rhen, and soon. “Oh you have time to fight me Lars, you’ve been doing it for years, its time to give in and let me kill you.” She reached for a dagger that was strapped to her leg. “I’ve been saving this dagger for years, just to kill you with... Don’t you feel special?”
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Ok people who may not get the whole Lars, curse, elf thingi.
Ok, so When Lars was seven, a elf came from the elf world to Lars's home. He was sitting in a field at the time, looking at the stars. And the elf put a spell on lars so that he would be half elf, until the spell was broken. And she also ereased his memory from the point when the spell was put on him, then she brought him to the elf world. and when he was eight he decided he was tired of others hating him for only being half elf. So he ran away back to the human world and a stranger told him something to help break his spell and then he grew up with his family. Ta da!
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I know this is ever so short... but the next part will come soon.
Zee help Part 41 “I. Said. I. Don’t. Have. Time. For. This.” I said my voice menacing, I whispered the words “vhen kri lear” which meant ‘sleep of length’ and Jay fell to the ground in a deep sleep. I stepped around Jay just in time to see Dameon almost trap Rhen in a cage that would appear every so often. I ran over to help. Out side the battle was going south for everyone who wasn’t a vampire or witch. The only vampires and witches on the human side where Gyendal and Gretchen they needed help or they would all die. A sudden marching sound came and most heads turned towards it. “Kill zee vampirz and witchez and zis time stab zem with zee pointed part of zee sword!” The commander squirrel yelled, there, was thousands of squirrels lead by one commander squirrel and one troubled looking Mad Marge. The crowd cheered. (Not the vampires or witches, just all the rest.)
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Death... dead. Any other way to put it?
Part 42 Well it turned out that Dameon was now really strong and could do amazing things during battle, which he defiantly couldn’t do when he was in our party, so I guess leaving us helped him in a way. “Really Dameon, people might not hate you as much if you didn’t have such a terrible hair-do.” I said as I stood behind the fool, he hadn’t even noticed me come up and as he saw the look of pure pleasure appear on Rhen’s face he turned around. “Oh its you...” He said his voice disgusted “your own hair is the color of a swamp.” I rolled my eyes, he should have learned by now that I always had a wonderful comeback for any insult. “Not only is your hair only half of what it use to probably measured up to but it’s also to color of dragon dung.” This one made Rhen smile. But then Rhen’s facial expression changed to a look of horror as a vampire grabbed her from behind. This could mean only one thing; the vampires had finished their jobs, which meant.... I glanced over to where Te’ijal and Galahad were now gagged and tied up in what seamed to be woven metal ropes and were knocked unconscious. My gaze then fell on Pirate John who was straining against the same strange binds to get to Elini’s side and help her. Elini herself was bloody and almost out of magic and as she used the last of it she fell to the ground and also was tied up. The others could have come and killed me right then and there but Dameon held them back with a wave of his hand. “Now Lars, you will be killed in front of all you friends, no one is to lay a finger on him, this is my battle.” So this was his game, he wanted to finish me and then make me friends’ watch when they were helpless. “Wake the two vampires up! They must all watch this.” How the end battle went. 1. Dameon rakes a long invisible magic claw down the Lars’s right cheek. 2. Lars screeches the word “Yellow!” as his cheek is bleeding like heck. (I hate the color Yellow so I use it as if it were saying, “crap!” or less pleasant things.) 3. Lars has black mist come from his staff and it encloses Dameon’s arm burning it severally. 4. Dameon also shouts the word “yellow!” 5. Dameon and Lars are both astonished that they both use the same word. 6. Lars takes moment of shock and summons mad bats to chew on Dameon’s hair. 7. Dameon summons butterflies with florescent powers to scare the bats off. (Remember Dameon still has silly powers cause he is the ‘sun’ priest.) 8. Dameon’s hair now looks very ‘chewed’ on. 9. Lars starts to laugh and Dameon takes the moment to have extremely annoying monkeys in pink pajamas come and squeal and confuse Lars. 10. Lars makes monkeys disappear and then gets mad because he doesn’t like monkeys and they tried to eat his staff. 11. Lars says 100 incomprehensible words and Dameon starts doing a mixture of dances including the can-can, waltz, and the tango. 13. The battle goes on for a long time... 12. This makes Dameon mad so he summons the most powerful spell he can think of and casts it on Lars. 13. Now Lars’s cut, bruised, burnt, shredded... you get the point. In other words beat up form is now on the ground moaning and groaning. 14.“LARS!” Rhen screams and the vampires and others laugh at her distress. 15. Dameon leans over Lars and tells a vampire of bring him a sword. 16. Dameon receives sword. 17. Dameon is about to kill Lars when... 18. Rhen breaks her binds punches the vampire holding her captive and he falls to the ground knocked out. 19. Rhen grabs her sword and runs to Dameon and Lars. 20. Just as Dameon is about to kill Lars Rhen stabs him through the back and it pierces his heart. 21. Dameon falls, dead. 22. Avey cheers and stops writing and goes to get a cookie.
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(Avey jumped up and down and spun around after destroying Dameon... and because Avey had a wonderful ending to the last one, cookies are wonderful.) (By the way forget and not slow down by Relient K is wonderful, I listened to this song while writing that last part and this part....)
Rowan... and more Part 43 While this whole battle was going on Rowan was... “But mama, I want Rhen...” Rowan complained. Rowan’s mother patted his knee. “Now, now, you will get Rhen don’t worry my darling.” “But I want her NOW!” He pouted. “I know sweetie, and you’ll get her don’t worry, mommy will take care of it.” The queen stood up and shouted to her head of special, secrete, services commander. The commander came running and literally screeched to a stop. “You called your highness?” he said as he regained his posture and breath. “Very observant, yes I did call. You are to capture Rhen Pendragon of Thais and bring her here, take her weapons and magic away. You got that or is it to confusing for your messed up brain?” The queen shouted she would do anything for her little Rowan sweetie. “Is he going to go get Rhen for me mommy? And if I don’t get her I will never speak to anyone ever again!” Rowan shouted and stomped off to his room. The queen sighed poor little Rowan he could be so sensitive. Back to our little friends Rhen, Lars, and the rest. Our group stood on a grassy cliff edge, along with several squirrels. We were there to commemorate the well-lived life of the commander squirrel. Mad Marge was sobbing and Rhen was crying silently while leaning against the completely healed me. A few tears fell onto my shoulder as Rhen rested her head on it. “He lived a life serving others in need. He was brave and a good fighter.” The squirrels went on and on... Everyone was in black, and the whole sight was depressing even the sky was gray. Most squirrels were blowing their little noses on their hankies. We hadn’t gone to the oracle yet because the squirrels had asked us to attend the funeral, if you look at the spelling of funeral you will notice it has the word ‘fun’ in it, well let me tell you they aren’t any fun at all. Sure we were glad to see Mad Marge again, but we all knew soon we would go in different directions. We ended that day with something even sadder then a funeral, we all split up, after speaking to the oracle we had all hugger good-bye and left each other. Rhen was sobbing; actually everyone had tears streaming down their faces. They all were done battling and adventuring except for me; I had my own personal quest that only I knew about. I had never really finished; I still had to kill Jay. So I watched from the sun shrine path everyone leave, Elini and Pirate John left on the Dragon, while Te’ijal dragged Galahad through a portal. Mad Marge left with Rhen to board different ships. I stood there watching as long as I could see them then I took a portal stone from my pocket and left to find Jay and destroy her forever.
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Part 44
Rhen stood on the side of the ship holding onto the edge and looking out at sea, tears were still falling down her face, as she knew that she would probably never see her friends again. The wind blew her hair and black dress so all alone on deck she looked like someone from a picture. “Get her! That’s the one! Get her!” Someone shouted and Rhen turned and screamed, as her wrists were grabbed and held together, she couldn’t even reach her sword that was leaned against the ships side. Someone hit her head and she was knocked out. Later she woke up and found herself in the back of a wagon on the floor. There were guards all around and she couldn’t see her sword anywhere. She knew they weren’t that dumb so she looked down and just as she had suspected there were two silver bands around each of her wrists, her magic would be no help. She lay back on the floor and let a single tear fall the wood she could never just have a normal life, though she knew she would hate having a normal life after all she had gone through. “Lars....” Rhen moaned, she knew he couldn’t hear her or help her, but somehow saying his name made her a little more peaceful though it made her cry even more. Images of rolling down a hill, and Elini spitting coco on both of them, the snowball fight, Lars falling out of a tree, Lars waving as Rhen left... The wagon stopped and the guards pushed her out, if she had been Te’ijal she could have bitten them, if she had been Lars she would have insulted them or something, but Lars or Te’ijal wouldn’t have gotten into this mess. Rhen was surprised to find herself at the Sedona palace, and surprised that a happy looking Rowan was running towards her. Though Rhen may not have the same cleverness of Lars she had spent enough time with him to learn a few things, like stepping out of the way so the person running at you slams into the wagon. Rhen was sure Rowan would have a few bruises after that. The stunned Rowan finally steadied himself to his normal composer. Even though Rhen was weak she managed to sneer, she knew that Lars would have thought it pitiful. Rowan’s happy smile turned upside-down and gloomy then it hardened and he spoke to the guards. “Take her to her room.” He ordered and Rhen was dragged inside the castle.
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(If you have seen enchanted, Rhen’s wedding dress looks a little like the wedding dress in that movie.)
Torture of ugly dresses Part 45 The whole next day Rhen spent standing while at least ten of the best dress makes, made her dress. She could have punched them and ran away, but there were guards right out the door and if she jumped out once of the windows she would fall three stories to her death. The dress had white netting sewn in little arches and at each point there was a pearl, there were about forty pearls in each line. The whole thing was about six feet across, but she could run in it if she had to. To Rhen the whole thing was torturous. “Hold still!!!” Another dresser said impatiently as she sewed on some more netting. “Twist around a little dear.” Another lady pulled Rhen around to face her, Rhen gave a little moan as another one pulled her in yet another direction. “Bend over a little bit so I can fix the lace...” Rhen was push downward and she couldn’t help it, she fell. She landed with a smack as her hands hit the wood flooring, her hair hung down in front of her face. The dressmakers ran over to her and hauled her up, and she stumbled as she was dragged back to the middle of the room. “Did you hear? May got thrown in jail for messing up on the queen’s dress! That queen has a real bad temper if you not her little Rowan she’ll shout at you!” One said. “Oww!” Rhen groaned as yet another needle missed the dress and poked into her skin. “Sorry dear, but if you don’t hold still...” The needle lady said. The two twin dressmakers each grabbed one of Rhen’s arms and pulled, while the others had been gossiping they had been fighting on weather the last row should have diamonds. “Diamonds!!! So she’ll sparkle!” The red haired twin 1 said and gave a big tug. “No! One should never draw attention during a wedding! Everyone is supposed to be looking at the bride!” The stupid twin said and also gave an extra big tug. The smarter twin rolled her eyes. “She is the bide dummy.” The smart twin said the other one looked confused and dropped Rhen’s arm and Rhen sighed in relief, she needed her arm still in her socket if she had to punch a guard. “They say that the prince gets anything he wants.” Another said. “He does, or I wouldn’t be here.” Rhen said and all faces turned towards her like she was a crazy monkey from mars who spoke a different language. “You don’t want to marry ROWAN?!” One said completely shocked. “But... But... he’s so handsome!” Another said, completely astonished. “So what? He already asked me once and I refused. I am not a queen and never will be.” Rhen rolled her eyes. “You mean he didn’t ask you this time?” All faces by now were completely weirded out. “No, I’m being forced to do this.” Rhen’s mind shot back to Lars who could be anywhere by now. “You could always say no.,” the one named Mekda said. Rhen gave a little nod. Lets see what’s going on with Rowan, shall we? “Mother... what if she says ‘no’ when she’s suppose to say ‘I do’?” Rowan asked as his mother combed his hair. “We have to make it so she can’t say ‘no’ like we’ll kill someone very dear to her if she does.” The mother said as she cut another little piece of Rowans hair. “Perfect!” Rowan squeaked. “Now... who is dearest to Rhen...?” The mother gave a little smile, she just loved to plan thins weather the motives were good or bad. “Elini said that Rhen had a best friend...” Rowan squinted as he thought. “Yes...” “I think it was.... Lars.”
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Lovely update, Avey.
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