Hello this is the second game I have started to create, the reason of this is because I think by making a smaller game before I keep making Lillian's Adventure. That it would help me improve my mapping skills and get to learn how to work the eventing properly without having any problems.


Treasured Locket
A small tale

Races: Only of the playable characters races)


Humans: A race that have those that are gifted enough to be able to control the elements and preform magic. The Humans and Elf’s have never been on good terms as long as anyone has remembered.

Elf’s: A race were many of its people have the ability to control the elements of nature and preform magic. They are normally peaceful except when a human steps on scared land. As long as anyone can remember the Elf’s and Humans have never been on good terms.

Animalian: A race were every resembles a animal with animal ears and normally an animal tail. Their race is mostly peaceful and tries to stay away from the other races but there are those who like to be cheeky and have some fun.

Fallen Angel: Those of the angel race who are stripped of their title as an pure angel because of breaking scared laws of the angels.

Summary: Alicia a kind and gentle young girl, whose parents suddenly disappeared one day when she was ten years old, lives with her grandmother. Her life is mostly peaceful, except for that she sometimes gets teased and looked down by others because of her blood. The last thing she received from her parents before they disappeared was an elegant but simple Locket, because of this she has always treasured the locket as a reminder of her parents. But suddenly one day Alicia comes home and sees a man in a purple cloak run off with her treasured locket. Because of its importance Alicia decides to go and chase after the man to get her locket back, with whatever traces and leads she can get to get her locket back. But why was her Locket stolen when there were more valuable things in her house that could have been stolen.


Characters:

Name: Alicia
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Race: Half-Elf, Half-human
Class: Mage (mostly Nature magic)
Weapon: Staffs (maybe enchanted bows as well)
Characteristics: Kind, Gentle, caring, and strong willed.
Profile: A 14 year old half-human, half-elf girl who lives with her grandmother due to her parent’s disappearance when she was ten. When her treasured locket gets stolen she goes after it to get it back.

Name: Katrick
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Class: Swordsman
Weapon: Swords
Characteristics: Energetic most of the time, easily angered, and sometimes very confusing.
Profile: A 15 year old boy swordsman in training, he loves exploring mostly in the woods. He joins Alicia on her journey to explore places he hasn't seen before.
Fun fact: Katrick hates cats, this hatred is because his mother has been obsessed with them all of his life, thus why he was named Katrick.

Name: Shanna
Age: 25 (looks about 17 in human years)
Gender: Female
Race: Animalian Cat
Class: Rouge
Weapon: small daggers
Characteristics: Stubborn, easily confused and loves to annoy others.
Profile: A 25 year old Animalian Cat, she is often thought to be around the age of 17 years old due to her looks and lack of maturity. She joins Alicia to aid her in her journey after she is rescued by her when she was weak.
Fun fact: Shanna loves fish, and often says Nyaa~ on the end of her sentences.

Name: Cain
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Race: Elf
Class: Spears man
Weapon: Spears
Characteristics: Normally quiet, distant, and cleaver.
Profile: A 15 year old Elf, he joins Alicia in her quest after they discover that they are after the same person. He has a great dislike for humans but warms up to Alicia due to her being half Elf.
Fun fact: With one glance Cain can tell what abilities certain herbs have.

Name: Dimitri
Age: Unknown (looks about 16 in human years)
Gender: Male
Race: Supposably Fallen angel
Class: Fallen angel
Weapon: Scythe
Characteristics: Split personality,
Normal personality: takes interest in others misfortune and is a bit perverted
Dark personality: Can be very cold and intimidating
Profile: Of what is said Dimitri is a fallen angel, no one seems to know the reason he became a fallen angel and he doesn’t seem intent on revealing the reason. He joins Alicia on her quest for an unknown reason but it seems he has some knowledge about Alicia’s locket and Alicia. He sometimes appears to be attracted to Males and Females.


More Characters to come
I would love for comments

Edit:


This is just a hand drawing of Alicia.





A hand drawing of Shanna I made her head a little too big.




A drawing of Cain.(might redo him later though)




A drawing of Dimitri.



A drawing of Katrick. I made his head too big T.T



A drawing of Alicia younger looking.



A failed kinda chibi drawing of Alicia and Dimitri arguing (Alicia looking confused and lost and Dimitri looking anoyed)I drew it because I couldn't think of what to make Katrick look like.

Screen shots (Only of first town and one of somewhere else)

Sounds nice, but is her name Alice or Alicia?

Her name is Alicia unless I change it later which probaly wont happen

Then why does it say
'Characters:

Name: Alice
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Race: Half-Elf, Half-human'?

Because her name is most likely going to stay Alicia unless I get a lot of people saying I sould change it

Oh, you changed it to Alicia. Nevermind.

Hahaha yeah I looked over it and noticed that I spelled Alice instead of Alicia sorry about that.

Just uploaded hand drawings of Alicia and Shanna how do they look and yes I know there are some mistakes.

Those pictures are great. How would we know if there were mistakes, though? We don't know what they're supposd to look like.

Thanks and what I mean by mistakes is that just some little bits are out of place. Do you think the pictures suit their profiles?

Oh. Well, I think they're great.

Well thank you then I know what colors Im doing Alicia her dress is going to be light blue and her hair is going to be blond with light green tips at the end to make her look more like an Elf. But I don't know what colors to make Shanna at the moment Im thinking light brown hair and the top red or green and light brown pants. Can anyone suggest some colors that they think would look good.

Well, I suggest a red necktie.

Hmmm good I could make her hair light brown her necktie and cloth tied around her right arm red her shirt green and her pant brown


EDIT:
Yo just uploaded a drawing of Cain and Dimitri how do they look, and I cant draw hands well.

They look awesome, especially Dimitri!

I know Im really proud of myself for drawing him

Hmm just posting to let everyone know I have completed mapping two area's complete with inside maps as well, I have also started two other towns one where I am currently stuck with what to do but the other one comming along nicely. And another thing my friends pointed out to me today that once again an bad habbit of mine has still not gone away, and that habbit is I FOREGOT TO DRAW EYEBROWS FOR THE DRAWINGS, I will fix it later though. Progress is comming along slowly at the moment due to my schooling arhh stupid tests. I will also be posting two more drawings today or tomorrow. No sadly neither of them is a drawing of Katrick or a redrawing of Cain, but another drawing of Alicia (she looks a lot younger in it as well) and a random kinda chibi drawing of Alicia and Demitri. By the way does anybody have any advice for a post town map that does not have a dock but does have a beach. I might also post some screenshots soon as well, anyway thats all for now.

Ah I know that I said I would post two more drawings yesterday or today, I would but I cant my mum is on the computer with the scaner right now so I will upload them tomorrow or the day after that.

Edit: I finally put the drawings up plus the drawing of Katrick, how does he look?

How Cool ! Even I have a Chara Named Alicia In my game !

Cool I was thinking of making her name Alice because I went a bit obsessed with a manga with the main character named Alice but I decided that I liked Alicia better because it just seems a little more like a elfs sort of name than Alice.