RIBBON OF GREEN
"I'm sorry for everything."




Ribbon of Green focuses on hope, strength and friendship within this competitive world of nothing but survival of the fittest and elitism. In a society like this, if you lose hope, nobody would help you. It will be all over.

This is the story of two female students who strived to survive in such a system. The system where the 'elite' students are treasured and well-maintained, while the rest are simply left behind, with no hope to the world...

Characters




Clarisse


Hanyuan's best friend since primary school, until the last year of secondary school, where her grades could no longer keep up to get into a good enough school.


Hanyuan


Clarisse's best friend since primary school. A clever student and a bookworm, could get into a prestigious junior college with ease. But what happens to her best friend who was left behind?

Screenshots:






Features
- Two endings
- 5,000 words
- 9 CGs
- CG Gallery
- Music Room
- Epilogue

Credits
Kirroha - Designing, Writing, Art
LumenAstrum - Art effects
Ana - Minor editing
SENTIVE, dai - Music
BASSnovel - Background Art
SENTIVE - Music

Download
http://soyasushi.webs.com/ribbonofgreen.htm

*downloads*

Now if I can just ignore the HO games I downloaded from Big Fish to play this...

That was fast!

*downloads game*

Hehe, it took quite a long time to finish, actually. ^^; It's just that I haven't posted a WIP thread until I finished most of the art already.

The website is temporarily down, so here's a direct link: http://www.mediafire.com/?ne80jb3d1iif7b7

Aw, it was so short. Nevertheless I enjoyed the story and I really liked the flashback drawings.

I tried this game out...
It kept crashing. I don't know if it's just my computer.

Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the game.

Can you tell me where it crashed, and what kind of error code you got? I'll try to sort it out.

Well, I actually replied to this topic about 1-2 weeks after I removed the game.
I think it happened during the second coin toss.
I will download it again to make sure. >_>
Sorry for not giving a straight answer.

finally, something to play with :3
thanks for this kirroha!

@ MaskedHood: It's my fault for overlooking a mistake. ^^; I'm trying to sort it out, but I suppose I just don't know where to start without some sort of error code. S: Ren'Py is really confusing sometimes.

@ Grisel: I hope you enjoy it!

I played it again and now remember why I removed it.

I kept on having the blue screen, which restarts my computer and everything slows down.
Some sites say to re-install/download the game to regain the missing files, but that didn't work. >_>

This game was so good. I loved the story and your writing style was fantastic as usual.
I enjoyed it a lot and tried all the choices possible.

Amazing job! :3

I have downloaded that. It seemed similar to Cinders.
Judging by the art, I think this one is better.

@Beginners: O_____O I just had to come and comment because your remark is bizarre.
Of course it's similar! They're both visual novels! do you not know what a visual novel is? Unless they're similar in story... which isn't true.

Thanks guys, but my art is definitely a million years away from Cinders'. XD I got a new artist, and the sprites are getting remade. You can check them out here: http://soyasushiproductions.wordpress.com

@Maskedhood: Oh no. S: I am completely lost as to why something like that will happen. I'll try to ask PyTom about it. I definitely do not have a virus in the game.

Now that you mention it... Either something is up with Ren'py or my computer is breaking down because every Ren'py game that I play now crashes every 5 minutes or so of playing. It didn't used to do this when I played Fantasia.

I can't play any new Ren'py games...

I've just played this. This was a very good story line for a short game.

Good job and efforts

My only complain is that the text are a bit too small in proportion to the huge amount of unused it has in the text box.