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aka: I cannot come up with good titles for things like this, and I have improved a lot recently.
That being said, here's some of my drawings ![]() From around... 2 1/2 - 3 months ago? ![]() ![]() ^ 2 of my OCs from a story I'm working on. ![]() ^ Aveyond fanart of Rhen ![]() ![]() ^ Trickster!Roxy (Hamsteak fanart) From around 2 months ago: ![]() ![]() ^ 2 OC doodles, probably won't do anything with these two ![]() ^ Final main OC from the story the previous two were from ![]() ^ Mitsuki fanart from Ryo's game ![]() ![]() ^ Korra fanart from... The Legend of Korra! XD Drew this after watching the first episode. From... this month-ish: ![]() ^ My OC/game character, Airika Bluesight ![]() ^ Last but not least, fanart of Te'ijal. I'm really pleased with how this came out ^^ So, comments? Critique/constructive criticism? Also, tell me if I used the new forum wrong. XD
Posted on: 2012/6/6 18:37
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Nice. You did improve a lot. Now to work on making men and women look different. Your Rhen and Te'ijal look like men. I don't mind Te'ijal looking manly, coz I totally draw her like a man all the time, but Rhen... Unless you do try to make her look boyish on purpose, try at least adding eyelashes and thinning out her eyebrows.
Posted on: 2012/6/6 21:06
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Alright, thanks for the input! I've always had trouble with genders, but it used to be making men look like women... I guess it works both ways. I'll make sure to work on that. ^^
Posted on: 2012/6/6 21:13
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I like your art. I don't think your women look like men at all. I've never subscribed to the "if it doesn't have long eyelashes, it doesn't look female" club. Nice work.
Posted on: 2012/6/7 0:21
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If it helps, Korra does look like a girl to me.
Both men and women have been drawn having long eyelashes in comics and manga after all, so eyelashes isn't exactly what makes girls girls, but most people still think that way. It's a bit iffy about what makes girls look girly. I've had people think my Mel drawing is a man and other people say "No, it's obviously a woman".
Posted on: 2012/6/7 1:13
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EsmeAmelia - Thanks!
![]() d_a - That does help, since I can try to see what I didn't differently drawing her then the others... Maybe I should work on making eyebrows a little thinner? I get caught between drawing them too thin or two thick, so that might help some.
Posted on: 2012/6/7 9:18
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