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Hi all,
I have been having some free time lately so I thought about writing this story,it's a very long story or at least I will try to make it long,I hope you like it! Rhen-Purple Lars-Green Dameon-Yellow Talia-Red Chapter 1:Life as a Queen: I chose to be a queen and to live with my husband, Dameon, I wasn't happy with my choice,I didn't want to be a queen,to leave my friends,but I knew I had to,My people need me and I can't let them down,not after the death of their queen Alicia Pendragon,my mother,since then they never had a happy day being attacked by demons most of time,they waited for their Princess, and now I came, I couldn't leave them. My face was a mark for my thinking and my sadness. Suddenly, I heard Dameon calling me, I didn't want him to see me, but what should I do? Hide my face? Go to the bathroom and say I am sick? I think he will see it eventually. I knew Rhen was unhappy by her choice,but Was she unhappy because she married me or because she became a queen? Just thinking in it makes me afraid,afraid that one day Rhen will stop loving me. I know this is a little short but eventually I will write more,I hope you like it for now!
Posted on: 2008/2/2 12:50
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Chapter 2 : Sleeping or Weeping?
"Rhen!Dear!",I heard Dameon calling me,I was afraid he would realize but I was sure he will. "Yes,dear",my voice was sad,it seemed that he would know. "Rhen,where were you? I kept looking for you in the whole Palace" "Oh,I was here in my room" "What's wrong,dear?You don't really look happy" "No,no,nothing at all" "Is something wrong?" His voice was anxious,he knew I was sad,but I couldn't tell him that I am not happy being a queen. "No,everything is fine" "Oh,ok,if you need talking about anything I am always here" "Thanks,dear" He then went away,when I was sure he disappeared,tears came down my eyes,I cried and sobbed quietly,but why was I sad? Dameon is so nice to me and always tries to keep me happy,why I am not happy? It was night and I had to sleep,I wore my night dress and went to my bed,I closed my eyes and tried to stop thinking and then found myself sleeping. Rhen became a queen and married that Sun Priest,I couldn't stop thinking about her,that slave was a princess all the time and now she is a queen of a big city,but me is only just a sorcerer who teaches at the Shadowwood Academy,maybe I started to like her and I even apologized for her,but though,she chose that betrayer,Dameon,though he was going to fight us without the fairy dust,she still liked him,I was right all the time about him and she still liked him,I always wondered what could have happened without that Sun Priest.
Posted on: 2008/2/2 12:51
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Chapter 3 : Rhen...dead?
I was so worried about Rhen,I couldn't wait until the doctor comes out of her room to see how is she doing,suddenly,he came out,I quickly went to him to ask how is she doing. "So doctor,is she alright?",I asked. The doctor kept his head down and then spoke. "To be honest,she is not fine,she seems to be under stress lately,and that got her to be sick with a serious disease" "But how?! She was fine by yesterday!",I shouted, I didn't control myself. "This disease has no symptoms,she was sick with it for long time I think but nobody realized" "But....is this disease dangerous?" "Well,yes it is,it can leads her to......death" "WHAT?! DEATH?!" "Yes,but there is a cure" "WHERE CAN I FIND IT?!"
Posted on: 2008/2/2 12:57
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ooooh! i love it! it's very good! i can't wait for the next update, you really have a thing for writing!
Posted on: 2008/2/2 12:58
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ohhhhhhh, i wonder what the cure is!! and where can he find it? somehow something tells me it involves Lars though...
Posted on: 2008/2/2 13:01
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yeah, his has Lars written all over it! like Lars is probably going to be somewhere in the cures process.
Posted on: 2008/2/2 13:42
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yep, exactly what i was thinking taffy!! but of course i love Lars so that may have helped my imagination...
Posted on: 2008/2/2 13:44
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hahaha who's lars, i don't really know his story very good but what i've heard he sounds pretty cool, i mean bad...is there a difference?
Posted on: 2008/2/2 20:16
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slightly, and only in some cases. but there are lots of stories that describe him(i think)
Posted on: 2008/2/2 20:30
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hahaha cool, sorry i haven't been on to see if there have been any updates in anyones storys so please forgive me love, furball, anyone else who reads this!
Posted on: 2008/2/6 14:39
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Thanks everyone! Update!
Chapter 4 : Rhen! "The cure isn't easy to find, and it's very rare, the only place you can find it is behind the mountains in a place nobody knows about" "I'll do it" "But you have to be careful, many monsters live there and they are very dangerous" "I'll do it even if it costed me my life" And I meant what I said, Rhen was more precious to me than my life itself, even if I died in the attempt.And because Rhen was the queen of Thais the biggest city in the isles, all the isles had to know that she is ill, that means that that sorcrer will know about it, but he better not come near Rhen, she is mine and only mine. As usual, I was in my room in Shadowwood Academy, preparing the lessons for the students, but I felt something wrong.....Rhen....something was wrong with her.....no, it must have been my imagination, I stood up and went to the window, it was night, the stars were so beauitful shining in the blue sky, it was Rhen's favourite thing to do..... Then, my dreams were interuppted with a voice. "Hear ye! Hear ye!", I heard, "The queen of Thais Rhen Pendragon is ill with a serious disease!" Hearing this, was like a knife in the heart, Rhen....was dying....I always seemes to hate her and treated her very badly, but she was beautiful and charming that I was falling in love with her....and now she is in grave danger and I had to save her even if it costed me my life. The music in the temple was sweeter than everyday, and the stars were shining beautifully, but then I heard a voice, I went to the small lake in the temple, and saw Rhen in her bed not looking well, she seemed very ill.
Posted on: 2008/2/8 3:30
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@Love
Great to see you reposting your stories again ^^, though I don't really have to said it here but I'll say it again good job with the story so far. I can't wait to see the more updates soon.
Posted on: 2008/2/9 13:59
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Thanks Elie! I'll be sure to update soon and make the fixes you sent me.~
Posted on: 2008/2/10 11:53
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nice updte Love!! i love the story so far!! i think it's great!
well, me and taffy were a bit off, but still somewhat on track. Lars was going to help find the cure, he just isn't really part of it. so far anyways, it might change over the story though...
Posted on: 2008/2/10 12:16
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yes, i really like it lov, no wait, i don't like it at all! i LOVE IT! it's great and i can't wait for the next update!
Posted on: 2008/2/10 12:45
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Thanks princess and taffy!
btw, taffy, love the quote in your siggie.*giggle*
Posted on: 2008/2/10 14:07
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i only read it today since i'm new hear.... it's really good!! waiting for more updates..
Posted on: 3/11 7:56
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Nice story! Which pairing do you suggest here? RxL or RxD?
Posted on: 3/11 9:54
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@eanLUViya & azureXtwilight: the authoress of this sory, Love, has officially left this forum, so unless she miraculously decided to come back, there won't be any update. Anyway, if you can see, the last update was 2 years ago. People who don't give updates for that long time won't usually update at all.
Posted on: 3/12 3:23
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She has? Good thing that I wasn't too hopeful with this story. no update in 2+ years = dead story.
Posted on: 3/12 5:41
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