Ok, for what i seen so far of ur work (don't get offended i just want to help u with this critic)i think for starters, the story seems interesting and good and i like the features.
Secondly, i like the characters and the way how u developted them.

Now to the critics:
-the character faces, the main character's face doesn't fit with the style of the other characters, and that isn't good for the game visual, u should think about changing it.
The rest of the faces are fine.

-The pic u use for the title is too small, u should think about finding one bigger.

-the maps:
-the interior map of the house is just perfect, but u should think about making the walls alil smaller.

-all of the forest maps need some changing, too geometrical, remember, this is very important: nature isn't simetrical, only man made creations.
don't make everything in the forest so straight, make some circles and some senseless curves, and put more deatails, a small river there, a flower somewhere else, be completly random when doing forests. You don't see square shaped forests or gardens or even citys in our reality.

- the small town in the second screenshot has the houses to big, noone lives in houses that big, and i'm sure even u have windows on ur house. plus ad a phew gardens to some of the houses.

- in the third screenshot... is that a room? don't make open spaces so wide. put walls, and stuff in the middle. if that's a class, u should have added desks.

Finally, the website loads!
Anyway, I think the face sets are great, except for Mitsuki's. Like what NightMelody said, she doesn't match the style of the other characters.
All other things about the screenshots, NightMelody already enumerated them.

Thanks for the comments, everyone! Ryo's glad the website loaded for you puppis. It might've been the music that was making the website load slowly. <(^_^)> Also, thanks for the critics, NightMelody.


-Ryo's planning on using a different picture for the title screen, but Ryo hasn't found one yet.

-Most of the maps Ryo's been redoing since those maps were from when Ryo had just started using the program. Ryo's detailed up the forest maps with flowers and stuff, now Ryo just has to reshape the little clearings.

-The map for the house that isn't extremely bad is actually an inn, but the walls do look a little high, don't they?

-Mitsuki's picture got blurry when Ryo enlarged it a little. Ryo'll fix that and see if Ryo still needs to change the pictre. If anyone happens to find a good faceset for her, tell Ryo and he might change it.

-The really large, extremely bad room was supposed to be more of a gym sort of thing. Ryo plans on redoing it, but Ryo's not sure how he plans to do it.

-The town with the gigantic houses was supposed to be a city (Tokyo perhaps?) It was Ryo's first ever map so Ryo's gotta get around to redoing it.

Ryo's glad he didn't post a Screenshot of Sheena's house. It looks like the inside of a gigantic castle with extremely tall rooms and high ceilings. However, Ryo already put like 7 cutscenes in there already so he's wondering how to fix that.
Now that Ryo looks at the town maps, his buildings are pretty tall. Also, he'll have to make a party-changing event or character since the party changer script doesn't work with the side view battle

Yuppeh I like how the new battle system is like, it's a bit like Aveyond's, and I love the battle system of Aveyond

Ryo started adding in the villains. Ryo didn't put in there descriptions, but at least you get some pictures of them. Ryo found a better picture for Futeki so he looks a little more girlish now. Also, Ryo's thinking about changing Yoriki's face, but that's not really important right now. Ryo hasn't found a better Mitsuki face though...

muahhhahahah
The villains really look evil xD

Ryo updated the topic with a Latest Development section! Hopefully, he'll remember to edit it whenever he works on the game.

The villains do look evil, don't they? But are they really evil...? Not all of them will be villains throughout the entire game...or will they.
(That was a horrible attempt at being mysterious wasn't it? XD)

The villains look good, in the meaning of looking bad , as well as the other characters. Some of the screenies are better, still too many trees though... looks like the forest is made just of trees...
i like the battle system.

Zombies! This one never dies.

It's always interesting to follow up on a game project development. Though, it's somehow disappointing to see another game having a title with "Eternal"; Eternal Eden recently came out!

Thanks for the comments! ^_^ Ryo'll have to go back and make the forest paths a little wider, Maybe he'll change some of the trees to dead trees, a couple of extra clearings would help too right?
Oh, you know, while he's in the working-on-the-game-mood he might as well write down what kind of weapon each character uses.

Hey, to give u a help with the maps, check out these ones, those are maps used on my game:

Forest:




More wide spaces, not too many trees. small details around.

Village:



Houses aren't tiny, but aren't huge either, with windows.

These aren't perfect, but i think they can help u with the mapping.

Thanks for the examples! ^_^ I see what you mean about the trees not being so tightly packed. I'll work on that.

Check the updates section for the updates! And thanks again NightMelody for the forest screenshot, it really helped.

well the forest screenshots look better but u could do better, and the battle music is good.

Yeah i randomly found the song and i was like "This would be a great battle theme". And I'm glad i'm getting better at the maps.

I swear, I love all the characters XD If I may ask, what program do you use for the facesets? Cause I want to make a game with RMVX too.

You know, some of the facesets of the characters looks like a VX game I downloaded not long ago called "Vigour of the Fellowship". Do you, by any chance, have anything to do with that game?

Actually I didn't create the face sets, I found most of them on this japanese rpg maker website called usui.moo. but for some reason the website hasn't been working lately.I got a few of the sprites from there too. And as for the rest I just searched all over the internet.

Mistic.Candy: I'm glad you like the characters. I enjoyed making them too.

New update in the update section. sorry it's been a while

the story looks great Ryo! i like how there r zombies n the battle screen is like Eternal Eden. N the characters look awesome!