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Re: Child of Dusk #41
Offline   Yuuki_Cross
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new!


He woke up, knowing that his brother is no longer alive. Helia failed, because he held her in the palace for too long. But then again, Helia could got hurted if she decided to stay with Pierre, and not to come to the palace, as she did. At least her life is speared. But how will she feal about death of a person she knew as Gabriel, and what will ahe do then?

His mother will be serene, because Pierre is dead, and he will not be able to ruin her plans for this kingdom and her older son. Now he is her only son… But if she only knew that he would give up gis life gladly for Pierre… The best brother he could wish for, even if he was always in his lonely moods, wishing to be left out from any occasions that were the places in which you can be sourraunded with too many people.

Andreas took a deep breath and he said in his mind the last godby with his deceased brother.
Dawn was spreading her light turning slouds pink and red, letting the world to know that the day has come, and night ended. So did the life of his brother, Pierre.


Queen looked in her mirror, admireing her image that was smiling down on her. Sun started to shine brightly, turning the ladn in to a wawy sea of grass and flowers that were surrounding the palace. Scent of irises floated in the air around her head.

She have some plans, and as far she knows, no one will be able to destroy them now. It was too late to stop them now…

Laughter came out of her mouth and echoed the Queens chaimbers and hallways all the way to the ground floor of the southern wing of palace.

Posted on: 2009/3/4 13:25
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Re: Child of Dusk #42
Offline   Mu11berry
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Evil vampress... and evil Queen... And... I love this!! Waiting for more

Posted on: 2009/3/4 21:02
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Re: Child of Dusk #43
Offline   Yuuki_Cross
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i'm glad you liked it. *smile*

"My sister is found." she said with peace and simple smile showed on her face. her eyes closed down for a moment, and she knew that she (her sister) is safe and sound. Night breeze gently blew in her face and she felt happiness.

"Are you shore it is your sister?" woman behind her was looking at girl (which will soon become a woman) that she taken care of since she was given to her on care. Katarina wasn't beautiful like her mother was, but her appearance was interesting and it attracted the eyes.

Dark hair (black in the night) and dark eyes were contradiction on her pail skin that seemed like it was transparent. Almost like she was a ghost, fragile and gentle. But her character was strong and intelligent like old scholar's.

"I know when i feel her. We are twins, after all, and there is no doubt that she's safe now. But i still can't tell where is she, and With whom... I can see that she's sad about something..." Katarina turned to her nanny, turning her back to the night sight from the tall, open, window. Yes, she was telling the truth and nanny could see it clearly.

"I still can't believe that you have a twin sister..." nanny smiled. "I always taught that you were the only child when your mother brought you to me before her death."

"Right..." Katarina sighed. "I suppose she had the reason for that... Leaving my sister to the strangers, and giving me to you, dear nanny, but i can't help feeling a little bit bitterness about that. I wish my sister and I were together from the beginning."

"And didn't you thought that she tried to protect you both, because you two together were in great danger? Or did she even knew that she had a birth of twins? Then was usual thing to do when they separate twins from each other and keep it secret from the mother. Many mothers didn't ever find out that they were carrying twins."

"Maybe you are right. Maybe I'm just trying to find the reason to blame someone that my sister is not with me. But i swear that i will find her. And when i do, nothing and no one will ever be able to make me go away from her if she wants me around. My sister deserves to know that she's not alone in this world." Katarina said that passionately and then she hurried up to exit the room, so she can go again in the forest of Twilight Moon.

After all, she is a Twilight child.

Posted on: 2009/3/6 9:32
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Re: Child of Dusk #44
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ATTENTION!!!

Soon, i will start RP in HB-tavern. If anyone is interested to join, please PM me, and i will give you more information.
i still have some things to settle in a plot, so it will take a week or so to do that. for any ruff informations (things that will be in RP for shore), you know... PM me.

Posted on: 2009/3/6 9:46
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Re: Child of Dusk #45
Offline   Mu11berry
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I'm... not sure where I lost myself but I did...
*rereads*
Oh! Okay.
Sounds good. Can't wait for the rest!

Posted on: 2009/3/6 20:48
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Re: Child of Dusk #46
Offline   Yuuki_Cross
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last update is where i put in a new character(s). explanations about them will be made later, as a story will progress.

Posted on: 2009/3/10 10:09
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Re: Child of Dusk #47
Offline   Yuuki_Cross
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i apologize for letting this story to hold on a little bit, but i am occupied with my rp. i will put an update, as soon as i take care of some rp things.

greetings.

Posted on: 2009/3/24 10:20
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Re: Child of Dusk #48
Offline   Yuuki_Cross
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MP : 92 / 5284
new update:

Last thing he heard, before his mind slipped in to the dark, was the laughter. A voice that reminded him on bells and the flow of the river. And the pain... The pain that was burning him under his skin like liquid fire.

Now he heard every move that were made by some animal, or something or someone else. but he didn't want to open his eyes, wishing and hoping that it will all go away. No... He wished that the voice and the pain was just a bad dream. Yeah... A bad dream.
Then he should wake up now. Helia will come soon and catch him sleeping, and he didn't want for her to see him with guard down.

his eyes opened slowly, and in the next moment a head showed up in his sight. Her wide smile was something that made him realize that this wasn't a dream, as he wished. This was his nightmare, caused by this damned creature.

He was damned...
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this one is short because i find it unnecessary to put in descriptions and more happenings, so next time it can be juicier.

Posted on: 2009/3/27 12:44
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Re: Child of Dusk #49
Offline   Mu11berry
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... ... ... ... *is staring at screen* This is Pierre with the vampress, yes? Evil vampress...
Now what happens?!

Posted on: 2009/3/27 22:30
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Re: Child of Dusk #50
Offline   Yuuki_Cross
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MP : 92 / 5284
mu11berry: that's correct. you will see now.


"What the..." the smile disappeared from woman's face when he grabbed her neck so quickly that he almost saw his hand as a blurred color of movement.

"What have you done to me, you damned creature? Tell me right now." his voice was a murmur that was filled with rage. She froze down.

"I turned you, to be like me, darling. now we can be together forever." she said it carefully like she was preparing for this reaction. He realized that he can think about more things at once, like his conversation with this dark creature, and the fact that the forest is so peaceful. The sun was shining trough the leaves and branches in shiny rays that were falling on the ground covered with old leaves and grass. Birds weren't singing, and no animal was heard at all.

"How dare you to do that to me?!"
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i have to stop writing and logout for now. i will edit it next time.

Posted on: 2009/3/31 11:57
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Re: Child of Dusk #51
Offline   Mu11berry
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MP : 152 / 6835
I'll wait, then. Impatiently, but I'll wait.
(I normally wouldn't say this, but I strongly dislike this vampire...)

Posted on: 2009/4/6 20:56
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Re: Child of Dusk #52
Offline   Yuuki_Cross
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MP : 92 / 5284
i understand. i hate her myself (and i created her- what an irony ).
i'm sad to announce that i will have to postpone new updates for a week or so. i'm momentarily busy with studying and preparing for my final exam of web and graphic design.
sorry, but i will make it up by posting larger updates.

greetings

Posted on: 2009/4/7 9:30
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Re: Child of Dusk #53
Offline   Yuuki_Cross
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HP : 0 / 364
MP : 92 / 5284
new update.
hope you like it...


Night was furfilled with a cooling breeze that was pleasant feeling on her face, making her close her eyes and breathe deeply. Moonlight was shining upon her, and she smiled knowing that the night is her time. She was complitley in love with the night and her belongings, but she loved the day too. Not as much as the night, of course, but the sun reminded her that the dusk will be perfect. The dusk is the time when the day meets the night, as she dreamt that she will find her twin sister.
For a moment she heard the painfoul shout, and a picture of the creature that was in pain showed up in her mind. Trees were evereywhere, and in the middle of that, person with pail skin was holding his head with two arms, falling on the ground. She couldn’t see more details because the picture started to fade from her mind very fast. She released a sad sigh.
“Oh, dear creature… What have they done to you?” she whispered when the vision have disappeared. She didn’t like to see those kind of visions. The visions of pain that pressured any creature. She just hoped that it wasn’t the vision of her sister because it would tear apart her soul, not be able to comfort her like she should have. But does she know that she isn’t alone? That she has a famely? A sister?


The creature of the night was standing there, he felt it well enough. His tauhts were filled with fear and disgust for himself. And mostly, despare. The despare was that stabbing feeling that he felt on his dying soul. Dying, because the creature of the darkness can not have a soul.
When he fell on the ground, he sensed the presence that wasn’t the dammn creature that turned him to this. He fell on the knees, holding his hands on the head and releasing a shout of pain and despare, and he could sense that the presence was shareing his pain.
The last thing that he felt was whisper, and then the presence was gone.


“My friend died.” Helia tought, blameing herself. “If onely I didn’t leave then… I could have helped him to defend himself…” but it brought her no good to think about what might have happen. He was lost, and a friend like that will be hard to find. Even if he taught that he loved her. He was just confused, like she was… Gabriel…
His death will not remain unavenged. Not as long she breathes this air.
Her jurney continued, as the huntress led her in unknown way. At least to her, this way was unknown. Oh, how she wished that Nadiene and Alex were here with her, so she doesn’t feel so alone.
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all for this time.

Posted on: 2009/5/10 10:28
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Re: Child of Dusk #54
Offline   Mu11berry
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MP : 152 / 6835
I guess this is the "bad part" ... I'll just wait for the next chapter...

Posted on: 2009/5/11 10:10
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Re: Child of Dusk #55
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I just found and caught up with this story - it's wonderful. Beautiful writing, lady_Selena!

Posted on: 2009/5/11 20:03
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Re: Child of Dusk #56
Offline   Yuuki_Cross
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MP : 92 / 5284
thanks guys (or girls *smile*). i'm glad you liked it. updates in a few days (probably tomorrow).
greetings.

Posted on: 2009/5/13 13:05
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Re: Child of Dusk #57
Offline   Yuuki_Cross
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MP : 92 / 5284
i hope you wont mind if i post here a improoved text por my intro to a another story (not for AM), and next time i will post a new update for Child of dusk. greetings.
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She watched silver syringe with dark poison, approaching with every movement which made the young man with beautiful face and smile. But something on his face was completely wrong, what forced her to shiver of inconvenience and her skin crowles. She found that it was impossible to omit any sound from her lungs. The voice betrayed her and it did not want to leave her lips even though she knew that now was the best time to screame from terror which came over her. His very dark, almost black, eyes are watching it with amusement and expectation of what should occur. As you could taste it, she knew that of all the feelings that showed in his eyes was mostly the impatience for the moment.
she tried to jerk the arm to move as far away from him as she could, but she was firmly tied down in the cold waiting, wooden table, and there was no point to continue trying. Room was dark and it smelled on old books. At her left side was a wall full of books on their shelves, which have stretched from floor to ceiling of library. In the corner of her mind she saw the candle burns, the weak glare, which was located on the desk. From her throat escaped weak howl that sounded as if it was made by a little puppy that someone struck. Could not detach from his view.
At the moment she remembered another face, similar to what the killer’s. Dark eyes, they were the same, but the other one was similar to the angel, not like a man who intends to kill her. He expressed in a way that sounded as he was from another age, as well as one that will take her, for a moment, life away. But the nature of them was so different, and it was too late when she realized. How could she fear more of that quiet man than this black man's soul, which it intends to end her life?
The voice of a man who it is now seen was seductive, trying to make her stop to think, but she resisted as strong as she knew and could. Her executioner wanted her death more than anything in the world, and it was in all the movements that he made. He looked still graciously, as he floated right over the soil, like some ghost.
Somehow from outside she heard thunder and the storm which went wild and rageing, coming to meet them and surrounding them. Rain started falling in heavy drops, which are the stripes on the roof and glass windows, breaking the silence that has always been difficult to present. She could feel all the sorrow and the anger of a storm that is growing, as opposed to an event that happens in this room. As that storm could prevent that creature don’t harm her. But his plans were such from the very beginning. He had chosen her for one purpose only, and that made her want to scream from all her lungs, but the lips couldn’t move.
Silver syringe had captured sinister light bougie until it moved closer, even morein executioner’s pale hand as it have not felt the touch of the sun in a long time. Her death now, easily kept her icy hand on the shoulder, pearcing sharply the thin needle near the top of her neck.
Scream full category was silenced by thunder that breaked trough the clouds that have floated on dark, dusky sky. The next moment it became clear blackout to her eyes.
Death gave her first and last kiss.

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this is my intro chapter of a story i'm writing. it would be great if someone would give me the opinion on it. consider that it wasn't originally written for english, and i used the translater for this purpose with mninor correction from my part (to sound better).

Posted on: 2009/6/2 13:49
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