Wow, Blurble! This is simply superb writing! It seems to me like you work with the few words that are given in the game and then work them into a whole new, wide background that somehow seems to be spot on! And I loved Mel's comment about the shoes! It seems she'll have to teach Edward just when not to be a worried prince!

Keep going with the stories and please, yes, do write one about Lydia! I think she has sort of the same potential Lars had in AV1 - meaning that she's totally b****y, but could actually be well liked in the forums if someone (hint, hint) wrote a story that explained where her nasty temper comes from.

Please write more!!!

Your story is great... but it kinda lacks something... it makes me think, "what's going to happen to the country in Mel and Edward's reign?"

You keep me hanging for a line that will never be written... *cries*

Wow I think I didn;t realize people had commented here. Um. Thanks everyone

@Mayflower: Thanks, I really appreciate that since that's a lot of what I'm trying to do.

@lonergirl: I have ideas for mel/ed in 3-4 but I need that to come out before I write them so I can figure out how to them in...

ZOMG I didn't notice "The Balcony" Until now :o *Slaps myself* Any way Yay! I loved the balcony scene I mean the everything! And I loved the fact that she didn't wear any shoes! This is great Blurble!

Thanks.

i like them both you should write more

Thanks

wee, oh.. please update this if you can. this story

Great story!!! I was never a fan of MelXEdward but you had converted me!!! yey!

really?

they're my favorite pairing.

I could wax rhapsodic about them for an hour, how they have such amazing chemistry and compatibility and guh.

well, I'm glad I converted you =)

haha, didn't convert me though
from the very start, i was a fan of the pairing

Funny because I'm not a fan of most of the Aveyond canon pairings... Ed/Mel is the exception (which is why if Amanda ruins them- angst, divorce, death I DON'T CARE- things will burn. a lot)

i like the one where mel and rhen talked to each other. it was so funny i gave myself hiccups!

Your story is great I loved the balcony one especially I wonder what Edward means by "My carrying services are offered only at a price" -smirks- Hehehehe........ hmm I wonder were he's taking her -smirks-

ironic that i wrote things will burn if they were ruined.... and then they kinda were.
D=

Wow! I totally love this!!

Thanks =)

It's fantastic i relly like it too

Thanks!