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Eenie Meenie Miney Mo Lovers (E.M.M.O.L)
a.ka. Eternal Triangle (Rye#Emma#Trevor) Intro on the Title Introducing my newest story to the community!!! This is the very first time I share a story in this Hungry Boar tavern!!! Let’s get to know better ‘bout the title “Eenie Meenie Miney Mo Lovers”! The story obtains three main characters as the second title says—Rye, Emma and Terrible Trevor. Yes, as every one expected, this’ll be ‘bout love triangle of them! Let me explain how I choose this title “E.M.M.O.L” ~ well, I must thank JB without doubt!!! Thanks to Marwan (Amaranthian) for giving me such an inspiration to write this! Plus, I love writing stories esp. romance ones of eternal triangles. Kyah, they’re just so kool~ My writing style will be similar to any of these writers—Russell Lee or Angie Sage, as they’re my faves!!! Plus, one day I’m gonna write for Russell! That means I’m gonna become a ghost-wrier like him…kyah~ Oh look at that! I’ve just waste a lot space on the intro—I’m quite a chatter box. Better stop the intro and ready for the reading part!!! Enjoy~ Contents Intro on the title……………………………..Page 1 #1 Triangle 1…………………………………....Page 1 (again) #2
Posted on: 2010/9/18 5:23
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Triangle 1
Location: Basement of Seri Palace “Are you sure you really wanna fight that Terrible Trevor guy? I mean, you’re a girl and Terrible Trevor’s a man—and not just a man, and he’s won like almost every year! He’s incredibly strong…You’d better not compete with him.” Rye said worriedly to Emma with those caring red eyes of his. Emma scowled and said “Strong, eh? You mean I’m not good enough to beat him up? You’ll see how powerful a girl is… after I’ve beaten him up!” as she stared at her dirty and smelly(?) boots. Before Rye could protest, Emma, without a pause, said “Don’t tell me, boy. You’re just feeling ashamed to polish a girl’s shoe, right? Especially, a sturdy girl’s shoe!”. “Whatever you say, you’ll never ever ever beat him up! Cuz you’re agirl! And a girl can never beat a boy! That’s the theory!!!” Rye said considerately. Emma chuckled in a very weird way that Rye laughed with her too! Emma said as you laughed, “Theory? You’re really funny, farm boy! Haha!” “But what if you get hurt, Emma?” Emma laughed more loudly this time and said, “You? Worried ‘bout me? Haha!”. Rye blushed. He couldn’t say any thing…as he was muted or something! His heart was thumping super fast as a rocket. But he still don’t realize why he was feeling like this—stupid, isn’t he? Emma shoved his shoulder and said, “I won’t lose to anyone! And you’ll see…” Rye just watched Emma marching into the fighting ground where Terrible Trevor stood still—ready to chomp up everything which block on his way!!! *** Location: Basement of Seri Emma came running towards Rye, holding a shiny thing in her hand, and shouted to him. “Look boy! Check out what this is!!!” Rye raised an eyebrow and said, “The golden belt!? Err…congratulations, Emma.” “You don’t sound so excited, farm boy!” Rye sighed, “Ok, you win this bet! From now on, I’ll be your faithful servant…” Rye murmured. Emma said proudly, “Good! And not just I win your bet but also I’ve proofed that your theory’s TOTALLY wrong!” Rye snapped, “Yeah, I’ll take that theory’s wrong but not totally.” “Whatever!” Before they could do something Emma heard her name called from her back. No mistake that it was the sweet gently voice of Terrible Trevor, Emma thought! Terrible Trevor came closer and greeted, “Hiya…Emma!” Emma blushed but managed to greeted him back, “Oh hello…Terrible Trevor..” Terrible Trevor pretended to blush and said, “Just call me Trevor. Just wanna say congratulations to you! I must admit you fought well in the tournament!” Emma blushed again and now her heart was thumping fast. However, she said, “Thanks, err.. Trevor!” They both stared at each other’s eyes and smiled softly. Rye felt really weird when he saw this. And yet, he couldn’t figure out what kind of feeling this is. But ‘jealousy’ is the right word for this feeling of his. Rye suddenly interrupted, “Er… hello? Thank goodness! You two haven’t turned into stone yet! Emma, aren’t we be leaving? Ean and Iya are waiting for us!”. Emma’s eye widened. She’s never seen Rye talking violently and seriously to her or anybody. She could recognize that Rye was angry in a way but she just couldn’t figure out why. “Ok, just gimme a sec, Rye” she said to Rye, then back to Trevor, “So what ‘bout seeing you at the tavern at eight tonight?” Trevor flicked a smile and without a pause, he agreed, “Yeah okay! I’ll be waiting there. Bye for now, Em!” he said as he walked away. “Em?” Emma murmured and smiled secretly to herself. *** Location : Grimm’s Cottage “So, you’re meeting him at the tavern?” Iya asked in amaze. Emma eagerly answered, “Yeah, he’s a really cool guy, ya know! And the strongest man I’ve ever seen!” “What ‘bout Rye? He’s strong too, don’t ya think, Emma?!” teased Iya. Emma blushed, “Hey, cut it out!” “What!? You love him don’t you?” “So does this concern with the meeting with Trevor.” “Yeah, it definitely does! I mean, what will Rye feel if he finds out that you’re going out with Terrible Trevor?” “Hey, I’m not going out with Trevor…But did he say that he like me?!” “Well, actually, no. But I can tell by looking into his eyes!” “Oh, yeah! I’m going now. So, see you, Iya!” Emma shouted as she scooted off. Iya just sighed. Just then, Rye came to Iya, “Hi, Iya!” “Oh…hi!” “Well, what’re you too talking about just now?!” “Oh that! Nothing much! Just girl’s things…By the way, have you seen Ean? I’ve been looking for him.” “He’s in the orchard.” “Thanks…” Iya said as she left the cottage. No sooner, Rye went out, too. But where to? You’ll see… The eternal triangle has just begun… *** To be continued ….in “Triangle 2” ***
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Just wondering is the Eenie Meenie Miney Mo Lovers taken from Bieber's song?
Nice start! The idead of Trevor vs Rye for Emma is original and great
Posted on: 2010/9/18 13:35
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Well, actually... I was listening Jb's Eenie meenie when I'm choosing the title for this!
Posted on: 2010/9/18 22:08
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A few grammar mistakes... but other than that! Its really interesting!
Posted on: 2010/9/20 12:07
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It is very interesting! Good characters.
If I could make on small suggestion - please separate your story into paragraphs with an extra space between them - it is much easier to read that way.
Posted on: 2010/9/23 23:35
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grammar mistakes are actually the style I write... and no way I could separate... it's my style..
Posted on: 2010/9/25 3:36
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ugh, Justin Bieber. haha..but i really love the story.. (so ill just pretend the title has no bieber song in it ) (dont ask why i dont like bieber. haha, he sounds like singing squeaky girl) (shrugs) ![]() ~waits an update ![]()
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the actual fact is i hate jb in a way... he's such a mini womanizer!!!!
Posted on: 2010/9/30 7:46
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@Meroko. UPDATE UPDATE
@ all- Seriously, you guys hate Bieber that much. I think he is not that bad. I actually like a few of his songs.
Posted on: 2010/9/30 14:03
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hmm...., update? well, i'm too lazy to do that! but it'll be up in next month. promise! ans yes, i do hate JB! cuz ya know, all girls are in love with him. jealous. jealous. pff.
Posted on: 2010/10/2 5:45
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ahahaha..
![]() hmm, don't be jealous of jb. i bet you don't have a squeaky voice ![]() just kidding ![]()
Posted on: 2010/10/3 7:33
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Come on! Stop this abuse of JB. He is my favourite FEMALE singer.
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Posted on: 2010/10/8 14:03
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![]() ahahahaha!! that got me ![]() yeah, theone, he's mine too ![]()
Posted on: 2010/10/9 6:55
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haha! female singer? i think i'll stop jealous-ing him!
Posted on: 2010/10/10 1:49
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To enjoy in the time being—waiting…
Why we* call Emma an ‘Eenie Meenie Miney Mo Lover’- We*= Ean, Iya, Rye, Gavin, Nicholas, Ava, Jack Eenie Meenie -1- (The day after Nicholas had apologized the beggar in Thais) Beggar: Hey! Did you just stomp on my toe!? *he scowls* Emma: N-O! *chuckles* Rye: But I saw you did it, Emma! Apologize to him! *crosses his arms and walks away* Beggar: Yes, you REALLY-ELLY should apologize to me! Emma: K, I’m sorry, beggar! You satisfied!? Beggar: No! Of course not!!! Emma: Yeah? Don’t tell me you want cheese! Beggar: No, no! No cheese! Emma: So what!? Beggar: Kiss me on the cheeks, then! Emma: Hmm…ok! *mwah* Beggar: Another time! Emma: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????? (Just then, Rye comes running) Rye: I-WILL-MWAH-YOU-INSTEAD-AND-STOP-MWAHING-MY-BABE!!! Emma: Who the heck are you calling ‘babe’??? *blushes* Rye: *blushes* (After a long pause) Emma: Well, what choice do I get!? *mwah* Beggar: KYAH~ Rye: *faints* Emma: WHATSOEVER. (Ean and Iya come running) Iya: *shakes Rye* Rye: Hmm………EMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMA!!! All: Eeeeeeeeeeeek!!! Iya: Rye! That was the total 19.99Hz!!! Rye: Sorry! (Rye turns to see Emma and all he saw is) Beggar: Fancy going out on a date with me! Emma: K, let’s meet tomorrow at 7 here! *mwah* Beggar: *mwah back* Emma & Beggar: *look at each other and blushes* All: *mouths open and a fly comes buzzing ‘round rye’s mouth* Iya: OMG! She’s going out even with this filthy beggar! Rye: *faints again* Eenie Meenie -2- (The day after Emma beat Shadow in Seri) (Ean, Iya, Rye, Nicholas, Gavin, Ava, Jack and of cuz Emma go into the Seri-tavern for a drink) Ava: Hey, Emma, see that cloaked-man there? Wasn’t that the one you beat yesterday? Emma: Oh, yeah! I really should greet him! *walks to shadow’s table and sits beside him* Rye: Why she goes and sits there!? Ava: She said she’s greeting that man! Rye: Which man, the cloaked or the armored? Ava: The cloaked one! Rye: Really? Ava: Do I look like I’m jokin’? Rye: No. Ava: Enough of your question, then! Rye: … *stands up* Ava: Little bit of advice—Rye—Emma’s kind of an Eenie Meenie Miney Mo. Rye: Of what? Ava: Of love. Rye: … Rye: Whatever it matters, I’ll continue lov…. Never mind! Ava: *starts singing JB’s eenie meenie* Gavin: That was such a lullaby, Aa-chan! Ava: Aa-chan!? Gavin: That’s your NICKname I gave~ Nicholas: Who called my HRH name!? Gavin: What, all of a sudden!? Nicholas: But you called my name all of a sudden!!! Gavin: NO I DID NOT!!! Nicholas: YES YOU DID!!! Gavin: NO I REALLY DID NOT!!! Nicholas: YES YOU REALLY DID!!! Gavin: NO I REALLY-ELLY DID NOT!!! Nicholas: YES YOU REALLY-ELLY DID!!! Rye: *scowls and walks to emma* #to be continued…
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ahahahaha!!!
major, EEWW.. (not to be rude or anything) but emma with a beggar??? XD ~waits for an update ![]()
Posted on: 2010/10/16 10:29
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Yeah, Emma's with the beggar. I think that might support her as a real Eenie Meenie.
Posted on: 2010/10/22 23:54
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ugh, Justin Bieber. haha..
(so ill just pretend the title has no bieber song in it
) (dont ask why i dont like bieber. haha, he sounds like singing squeaky girl) (shrugs) 














