Hello! I am in the process of making my very first visual novel and it will be a romance/dating sim! I don't have much of the art done but as soon as I finish a character I will post it here.

STORYLINE:
Celest is a girl whose very different. She's abused by her dad and her mom walked out years ago. She is very caring toward others but is never given a chance to show this kind side of her. She thinks differently and is a bit of a daydreamer. She has blood red eyes but nobody knows why. A natural eye color like that isn't normal. Finally when she has had enough of the abuse she runs away. After finding a garden she ends up stumbling into the rabbit hole and finds herself in wonderland centuries after Alice's appearance. Too bad the stories lie. Alice never defeated the red queen. Now her descendant the red prince rules. He aims to take over the surface world. Can they stop him before then?

SETTING:

The places where Celest will go includes a forest full of insane flowers and trees, the rabbits house (this is not a hentai so get your mind out of the gutter!) and the red prince's palace. There will probably be more places but for now that's all I've got.

CHARACTERS:


Celest


Elliot (Hatter)
He's friendly but a little flirtatious. Like everyone in he family he's going insane. He tries to hide it but somethings are inevitable.


Cheshire (Cat)
He's shy and quiet. He gets embarrassed easily and doesn't know how to communicate well with others.


Jabberwocky
He's strong, distant, cold, and can be hurtful but he's really just trying to hide his acual feelings.


Oberon (Caterpillar/butterfly)
He has gone through troubles but he doesn't like to show his pain. He rather not trouble others.

Kaito (rabbit)
Unlike his ancestor, Kaito is never late for anything. He's incredibly relaxed and carefree.


William (Red Prince)
He's strong and easily angered. He likes to tease people too. He can say hurtful things at times.


March Hare
He's crazy, energetic, and confusing. He also has a horrible sense for direction.
Those are the dateable guy characters.
EXTRA CHARACTERS:

Mary (White Princess)
A kind, sweet, and caring girl who's forte is magic and healing.

Rinny (Dormouse)
She's a young child who's energetic and skilled with a sword.

THE ARTIST IS APPENDAGECHILD

Please tell me what you think and if you have any suggests I'd be glad to hear them.


Story: 80%
Script: 70%
Characters: 33%
Backgrounds: 0%
CGs: 0%

First welcome to Amaranthia
...and second - I love these kind of games!!

I like the story. I personally love to see many versions of Alice XD

You can put pictures here using [.img]picturelink [./img] without "." I hope that helped

I saw your progress on lemma soft and it looks great so far, I like it..can't wait for more updates

Your story line looks good and Im kinna no a lot into wonderland stories right now, and have you ever read Heart no kuni no alice its got a boy named elliot in it and he's the hatters assistant though, oh well.
And A BIG WELCOME TO AMARANTH

Nice storyline Cant wait to see screen shots!

I really can't figure out how to upload pics from my folder! It's making me mad!

It's Celest!!!



And the rest of the completed sprites!

Er, vnlover, you're uploading these directly from your computer. It cannot work just like that. You have to upload them into an online image archive like Photobucket or Imageshack.

It's williams sprite!


And the March Hares


Ain't he cute!

Cool I luv Celest dress

They look amazing.

Hey, does the March Hare miss an arm?

Yes ^-^ haha I should probably ask my artist what the deal is with that O.o

Jabberwocky is done!

cool looks good

Your characters are sooooo cute!

Waaaaaait. How did you get here, vnlover? xD
The last time I saw you, it was on LemmaSoft... never expected you to be here xD

ANYWAY. (Ranting stops)
The story's really nice, and I love it. Especially the VERy nice twist. Although I suggest you hire some sort of consultant or co-writer or something...

Thanks LadyGodiva
And yea I'm on lemma soft LumenAstrum. I just wanted to spread the word ya know? So more people know about it ^-^ and a co-writer sounds like a brilliant idea! Just don't know who would do it hmmmmm

This is great! ^_^ I love playing Otome games as much as RPG's! The story line is great and you characters seem so adorably cute!! <3 Have you ever thought of releasing a demo?

yea but I need more visuals to do that and thanks

Hey guys I know I don't update much on this thing cause my main spot is lemmasoftforum. Anyway I'm sad cause my artist is sad and when ur artist is sad their likely not to draw. *siiiiigh* I was hoping I'd at least have the demo out before summers over but I might be outa luck

I like the artwork ^^