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I used to be making a game called Angel's Curse. But I decided not to, and skipped to the sequel.
But... here is the story of Angel's Curse! The sequel is a game (an RPG) called Warlock's Pendant. Light isn't always a blessing... it is sometimes a curse Prolouge (used to be the intro) The angel moved sliently across the floor. She picked up her pace as she manuvered through the castle. Finally, she entered the room where the Head Angel, Lady Tek, was standing. She was sitting down, looking around the room with a bored exspression on her face. "La.. Lady! Lady!" The angel called. Lady Tek turned her gaze to the angel. "What is it, Havavail?" she asked. "I must warn you... for... I have seen...." stammered Havavail. "What have you seen, Havavail?" Lady tek asked, sharply and loudly. "I... I saw... this... this year...." "WHAT will happen this year?" Lady Tek said, almost roaring. Havavail aproached Lady Tek and whispered something to her. "Then, we must prepare." Said Tek angrirly. "I will not allow my place of power to be taken from me, let alone by a non-angel!" --- Please tell me what you think! If you want, I'll put more.
Posted on: 2009/6/25 20:23
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Interesteing for a start, but doesn't really explain anything does it?
(which is fine for a prologue)
Posted on: 2009/8/16 22:39
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It's a good prologue don't really understand wats happening tho
Posted on: 2009/8/16 22:54
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yeah i dont really understand it.
Posted on: 2009/8/17 4:54
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See, it becomes important later on. You don't really need to pay attention to much of it, but the last line; "I shall not allow my place of power to be taken from me, let alone by a none angel!" is very important when you get to the actual plot. Thanks for commenting, by the way.
P.S.- the conversations may be a bit odd, remember this was orginally going to be a game. Also, the chapters may be kind of short. Chapter 1 Henlore quickly climbed out of bed. While some people may be dissapointed or annoyed or have some negative feeling towards the first day of the school year, Henlore was eager and ready. He could finally go to GoldenVine academy, and learn to be a Mage. (Not to mention get away from his mom for a little while...) "Oh, hi honey!" his Mom said when he left his room. "Hi Mom... could you please not call me that?" he said, a little embarassed at his mom calling him, 'honey'. Honey was something you put on bread, not something you called someone. "Call you what, honey?" She's doing it again... Henlore thought to himself. "Call me honey." He said. "I am calling you honey, honey." A-yi-yi, I didn't mean THAT. "I meant... don't call me honey." Henlore's mother, who was a bit annoyed at Henlore's beahvouir... But he is sixteen, after all... decided he was going off to the academy and she shouldn't put a damper on his day by scolding him or doing it again, "Oh sorry, honey. " She said. Henlore looked a bit angry at her doing this; "Oops.". End of Chapter So... whad'ya think of Henlore and his mom? Don't worry, the next chapter should get to the actual plot.
Posted on: 2009/8/17 8:16
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his mom is just like mine she still calls me bunny.but I like this so far
Posted on: 2009/8/19 10:40
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I'm glad you like it.
It may take a while for me to do Chapter 2, as I'm going to actually type this one up on Word.
Posted on: 2009/8/19 10:53
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@Elemental
Prologue and Chapter 1 lookins good, short as they are. I'm definitely looking forward to read the next chapter ![]()
Posted on: 2009/8/22 3:05
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Thanks, Elie. Yes, I remember you were interested in the game.
And... next chapter. Meanwhile, I take a break from Henlore and his Mom... Chapter 2 …Weavern... …Go home…. …Tree Haven…. …Let this happen… Take me… … Who… …My fault… Take me back… I don't have one… …Don't… ask… …Hurt her… ...Don't care… You will not… She woke up, screaming. This was it. She had to get going. Somehow, she had not woken anyone up. She quietly stepped out of bed, walking into the warm streets of Flimae. The streets were empty, and the town was small, but she had lived here for years. Ever since… she tried to let that memory fade away. Where will I go? She asked herself, the part of her that wanted to stay-- but that was overwhelmed by the part of her that was determined to go. Hengray. She thought. Yes, I will head for Hengray. And so, Katee Merville, having no idea what would happen next, left for Hengray village. She never knew that she would not reach there, until years later… End of chapter. Yes, confusing. Consider this a cut-scene.
Posted on: 2009/8/24 13:20
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| Re: Angel's Curse- Updated August 24th, 2009 | #10 | ||||||||||
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Cut-scene...I'm ready for chapter 3!!
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Posted on: 2009/8/24 22:45
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| Re: Angel's Curse- Updated August 24th, 2009 | #11 | ||||||||||
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Thanks. I'm trying to type chapter 3, but... right now I'm trying to work on my game, so... it may take a while.
Posted on: 2009/8/26 17:54
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| Re: Angel's Curse- Updated August 24th, 2009 | #12 | ||||||||||
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well then, i will eagerly await chapter three and your game!!
Posted on: 2009/8/28 16:25
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| Re: Angel's Curse- Updated August 24th, 2009 | #13 | ||||||||||
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Thanks. Hopefully chapter 3 will be sooner then later.
EDIT: This is probably really obvious, but this story is on hold. For a long time.
Posted on: 2009/8/28 16:32
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